|Reviews for The Last Jedi|
| Fragments of the World chapter 46 . 2/22
I...I'm speechless. Seriously. I literally could not take my eyes off this.
| thebeautifulbicky chapter 3 . 2/17
Dayum, that history! You've spun an amazing web of stories :)
| thebeautifulbicky chapter 2 . 2/17
I'm guessing this is completely OC? Slightly disappointed, because I think the Skywalkers are awesome beyond measure, but it's a great opening two chapters anyway! Nice writing and nice plot :D
| Mr. Admiral chapter 24 . 2/9
I have a feeling the Ackbar is going to run into a trap.
| BellaTrixUpMySleeves chapter 46 . 1/18
What a journey! I don't know what I could possibly say that hasn't already been brought up in the other 1000 reviews so I'll just keep is simple:
That was awesome. It inspired awe within me as I read it. Your original characters are wonderful and I can honestly say that I'm going to miss them all, especially Tobin.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
Argh...why Jedi...why not sith ffs
| fang of the fox chapter 46 . 10/30/2013
I love all you stories. I just sat down to read this because i was in the mood for a good starwars story. i saw that this one was write by darth marrs and thought that this one must be good. 10 hours later im thinking, "what just happened to the clock and damn that was a great story." Great job with the story. the characterization was amazing with Tobin's growth and his journey. i should had read this much sooner. )
| SemenDemon chapter 19 . 10/28/2013
| T. Alana M chapter 7 . 9/8/2013
So the original characters like Luke will just make brief appearances? :(
Great story tho :D
| Luna's Meow chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
I read this entire epic in a day. Awesome.
| OhGod OhGod Were All Gonna Die chapter 46 . 8/22/2013
I must say I have read most of your stories, and while I have enjoyed them all, this has been my absolute favorite. The time and effort spent to mold your characters has been amazing. I was sad to see that I had come to the last chapter but I am glad to have read it. Amazing work.
| Guest chapter 42 . 8/9/2013
While I thought the NJO was ok and legwcy was terrible you did ok by the vong
| Guest chapter 41 . 8/9/2013
Throughout it all, Taklon sat and sipped his caf. "Much too old for all this running around," he said, raising his cup to the Bothan's body. "That young lieutenant is a good shot, isn't she?"
Great line lol
| Guest chapter 36 . 8/9/2013
"A superlaser?" Mariha sputtered. "Those are illegal for a reason!"
"Yes they are. Now brace yourselves."
one of my favorite lines ever.
While your harry potter work is good you sw fiction is exceptional.
| Razi chapter 46 . 7/2/2013
By far the best Star Wars fic I have ever read. There were some typos and misplaced words alone the way but it does not ruin the story itself. I will refer this fic to any that is interested in a very good and balaced star wars fic.