|Reviews for Hanging in the Balance|
| Corsaiir chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
Well first off, it was a great story! Definately better than the few others who molded the same scene.
I do have a few minor issues. You used Sky Walker, when the term is Dreamwalker or Sky Person. Unless you chose to combine them.
Another is how you listed off Jake's surroundings. Obviously better than few descriptions, but they seemed to come on a little strong.. or something.
Again, a well written piece. Hope to see you write about Avatar again!
| VividInk chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
Nice! I like your interpretatin of Eywa. Personally I didn't see her as being Na'vi, since she's the mother of the whole of Pandora, but you made it work. Great!