Reviews for One Breath
Nitrea chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
love It!

maravelous chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
Very, very creative. A fantasticly original idea. I wouldn't exactly call it dark or angst unless there's a scarier reason behind it. But that's probably because I've actually tried holding my breath like that before. It's kind of a theater thing, a bit of an excersise to clean out your lungs. I haven't tried it as a high, but I have to say, you described the feeling percectly.

Overall, good job. Very creepy.