Reviews for That One Time, With That Thing
PastOneonta chapter 8 . 7/26/2016
This is so good. It fills a void in our knowledge of early Neal, Neal with Kate, and Mozzie. And while Neal was still on the outside, before he was a convicted felon and he was just the guy Peter had been chasing for years. Neal was messing with Peter and having fun with it. He was becoming Elizabeth's friend. This was very well done, very thorough in the details of the crime, perfect in it's look at all the relationships. Peter didn't trust Kate even then. Mozzie had the sense to disappear! Thanks for writing.
MargaritaS chapter 8 . 4/30/2016
loved it :)
Guest chapter 8 . 10/8/2015
Very funny and well written. Thanks for sharing :)
Rehabilitated Sith chapter 8 . 9/9/2013
Loved the banter going back and forth! Awesome!
Who First chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
This has been one of my favorite stories since I first read it. :D Though this is the first time I've reviewed, sorry about that. But you did an amazing job. The characterizations are spot on, the story is solid are leaves plenty of room for the their humor and awesomeness.

Honestly I like this better than some of the episodes. :D Also you wrote the best cat ever... Also I named one of my cats Mister SchmooDeFluffikins. Mister Schmoo or Schmoodles for short. He's large and fluffy and spoiled rotten. Crazyness but yeah. / anyway. Three years later, and I still love rereading this.

So great job. 3
Dimac99 chapter 8 . 3/24/2013
Absolutely adore this, esp the little twist with Neal's food orders for Peter, that was sweet. I like that Kate is the mercenary one of the pair and that Peter still doesn't know Mozzie's name or face. I also love the idea of Neal leaving notes for El at his crime scenes!
Arches67 chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
Great great story! I loved it. Thank you very much
ClaMiAl chapter 8 . 2/17/2013
LOL! This story had me in stitches. The Peter/Neal dynamic was awesome!
wotumba1 chapter 8 . 12/16/2012
LOL good story,
loved the ending!
wolfgirlalways chapter 8 . 8/24/2012
The ending was great. Thanks for sharing your story :)
mouse8 chapter 8 . 8/15/2012
This was absolutely tone perfect and so much better than what Eastin came up with in Forging Bonds. You should right for the show because this is my canon from now on. Fantastic!
Crystalzap chapter 8 . 8/9/2012
lol love that ending line XD
cimmer chapter 8 . 7/17/2012
I really liked this. I loved Mozzie the 'walking muppet'. I felt for Neal and his need to be arrested by someone with good facial grooming and Peter was a hoot. I really appreciated that Jones got to be someone with ideas, good ideas at that and I must say, I also found your take on Kate very interesting. Her banter with Neal over the care and feeding of FBI agents was amusing and I could easily see why they two of them would get along but I think Peter has her pegged and I would say of the three of them (Mozzie, Neal and Kate), Kate is actually the 'truest' criminal. Neal's a nice guy for a crook and Mozzie marches to his own beat but I believe Kate has a real streak of sociopathy (not a word I know) running through her that Peter and Mozzie are well aware of but if which Neal is completely oblivious. She's got teeth, that lady.

It had a lovely ending and now I have a picture stuck in my head of Neal with a porkpie hat. lol Thanks.
SubRosa7 chapter 8 . 11/18/2011
Great story! The Neal and Mozzie interaction, and the Neal and Peter interaction, was just wonderful! I really enjoyed your dialogue, and Mr. Shmoodefluffikins made me laugh. I also liked the way that Peter calmed Neal down at the end.
ferryboat George chapter 8 . 11/16/2011
I wasn't sure I'd like a prequel, since I love the relationship between Peter and Neal and wasn't sure it would be the same before the show, but you managed to capture it beautifully, and totally convincingly on how Neal got caught, and I love it how you show that Neal was telling the truth about practically turning himself in, that is so cool :)
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