|Reviews for Broken Dreams and Beautiful Nightmares|
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/10/2013
I am 16 and my partner is 28. He is my Jacob in life. I read your story and I guess I like it. If jasper could get away I guess maybe one day I can. But then again it is a story and I'm in real life. I don't know... But anyway your doing great with this story.
| rory chapter 10 . 2/17/2013
| TectonicPlatez chapter 10 . 1/26/2013
What happened? I really like this fic and it's been years, lol
I'm waiting for Edward to come along and swoop Jasper off his feet like Jacob never could
UNGH. where are you? :D
| me chapter 10 . 1/2/2013
Please continue please :)
| The Red Teardrop chapter 10 . 10/29/2012
Awesomely written chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed it:)
| psyfilover chapter 10 . 10/2/2012
Gah! This story has so much heartbreak and I just now realized it's not complete and the last update was years ago :( I'm sad that I won't see how it ends. I truly want Jasper to be happy. He so deserves that. Thank you for writing so well and getting me to really feel for this fictional character. Please let me know if this story is finished somewhere else! Please Update!
| pollypocket911 chapter 10 . 9/24/2012
Amazing. Beautifully written. You have such a talent for writing. Brilliant.
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/14/2012
Made it to the heartbreak, loving it!
| twi-fic luver chapter 10 . 7/20/2012
I'm not sure how to compliment this story without making it seem like I don't understand the weight of it—because I do.
With that said, I think it's written very well. Are you planning on finishing it? Or did you simply lose interest in writing it? (just wondering)
Thank you for opening my eyes to this serious issue.
| hiimminho chapter 10 . 6/17/2012
are you gonna continue this story? pretty please, yeah?
| dlb2546 chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Are you going to finish this story?
I absolutely love your writing. I hope you haven't scrapped this story.
| flutterfli chapter 10 . 1/10/2012
I know this hasn't been easy to write (or read), but I'm so proud of the way Jasper stuck up to Jacob. He is starting to reaqch the other side. I feel for anyone that has been in this situation, but you have hit the nail on the head... You get blinded by love and only want to feel that in return, you'll do anything to hold on to that feeling of being wanted. I didn't go through the physical abuse, but mental and the fear of being alone I have. While I have tried to move forward years later, I still fear there is no one out there. I know the story is hard to write, but I hope you will continue it. Or just send me an Edward. LOL I am truly enjoying each of your stories. Your stories are realistic and show that there is hope. (Isn't that what Twilight meant to so many of us older fans.) Thanks for sharing.
| Julietandthebroken chapter 10 . 12/9/2011
This is amazing.
I've been where Jasper is, and I still was until a few months ago. You represent the emotions really well. Please continue!x
| bethi13212 chapter 10 . 11/15/2011
This is so accurate and believable from a first hand point of view. I hope you continue it.
| It's A Secret chapter 10 . 11/6/2011
I love this story. I kind of assumed that we would have met Edward within the first couple of chapters and everything would be like BAM like most of the other stories. But I like this so much more. I love that we get to see how Jasper is growing and evolving and handling the break-up and eventual divorce. I love that Jasper is not automatically strong and independent. He is in pain and I love that we get to see him in his downfall instead of just having it as a memory like so many authors do. I love how Jasper isn't handling this PERFECTLY but that he is FUCKED UP. It's really a breath of fresh air because it's so real. But what I love love love the most is that Edward is not in the picture yet. Honestly, when Alice took Jasper to the club I was like "oh no, here we go. And cue Edward in all his perfect glory". But that didn't happen and Jasper took home an asshole and it was a HUGE curveball and it's GREAT. 10 chapters in and I still have no clue where this is heading and I adore that in a story.