Reviews for 20 Minutes to an Hour
alise45647 chapter 6 . 7/31/2012
i love axel, he's so funny
SpiritGuardian96 chapter 6 . 4/30/2012
Great story. I loved it!
Terra ForceXIII chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Damn you and your awesome writng! lol XD
The 666th necrophiliac chapter 6 . 10/9/2010
Good work, but there were many miss-placed commers.
Anonymous chapter 6 . 4/15/2010
A great ending-I adore Xion and Sora. And oh God, Axel. I'm glad you added this.

And thank you as well for explaining your thought process. I see it now from your eyes, and it makes sense.
Kairiangel035 chapter 6 . 4/11/2010
Aww such a cute ending _ Axel and Terra were hilarious at the end
AquaStormXIV chapter 6 . 4/11/2010
Sora and Xion are their babies! that's so cute! i love little Sora anyway! and picturing a little Xion too!

but good to know it worked out for Terra and Aqua. now they're happy with two little kindergarteners. good chapter.

and i agree with Terra's "oh great" at the end. Axel gets under my skin too.
WonderHeroe chapter 6 . 4/11/2010
this is the best chapter EVER!(well to me that is :P) very cute and sweet in the begining, but straight down HILARIOS in the end with axel! xD
iceandfire66 chapter 6 . 4/11/2010
Haha, what a happy (and humorous) way to end this story!
iceandfire66 chapter 5 . 3/20/2010
Wow, she is pregnant. Surely Aqua and Terra will make good parents though.

Wonderful job on this story!
Anonymous chapter 5 . 3/20/2010
It was really good, all in all.

Though I think it was silly to have them be twenty-one. You said in the description they were teenagers, and the whole story was much more interesting when it had the danger of teenage pregnancy and the decisions that came along with it.

Then you were "Nope, they're old enough for children!"

Some people may like that, but I would've respected it a bit more if you kept the same theme throughout.

Good job though. :]
BlackFrozenRoze chapter 5 . 3/18/2010
i loved it, this fic and yes a epilogue chapter PLEASE
A Real Ass chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
I loved it! Write the epilogue!
AquaStormXIV chapter 5 . 3/17/2010
HOLY CRUD! SHE'S PREGNANT? oh, man, Terra!

i liked this story and i'm sorry to see that it's over. anyway, an epilogue? hmm... i'd like to know how they do with their baby. but good job on the entire story as a whole.
Kairiangel035 chapter 5 . 3/17/2010
woah! she already knew before all this...I did not see that coming. Great story
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