|Reviews for When You Lie Next To Me|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Awwwww. Lovely story and well written :)
| Catmint chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
This is beautifully written. Really good characterisation, handling of emotions, writing style, pace, etc. I really enjoyed reading this.
A couple of minor things:
- it should be "complemented", not "complimented" each other - complEmented means that they balance each other out, that they have different skills that help them when they're together; complImented means that they're saying nice things to/about each other.
- "There would never be uncertainty about where his heart lie." - should be "lay", not "lie" (different tenses).
- "Tony was soul mate" - I'm assuming "her should be inserted after "was"?
| Amilyn chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
VERY nice, "We are no longer pretending." THAT is a lovely approach to tying things together.
| Robern chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
| Agent Striker chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
pretty darn good, i rather liked it! ;]
| QueenAlla chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Ha. I love this. No, I don't think they 'did it' in Paris either, but it's a cute thought :P Then again, Paris seemed to work for Jenny and Gibbs! xD
I'm just gonna go by 'what happens in Paris, stays in Paris'. (It exists now.)
Man, 19 reviews! -writes Jetlag drabble- loljks xD
"They had always been terribly good at putting on a show when it came to each other. Though neither was fooling the other."
I really like this line(s). Very sweet :3
You know, I'd really love to know the honest truth about what the writers of NCIS would make Gibbs/the team act like if they found out Tony and Ziva were together :P Though I know one off them would have to get put onto another team :l That sucks.
Anyways, great fic, I really enjoyed this. Nice work! -
| Prissy and Bregan chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Don't say 'yet another fic about Jet Lag'
There aren't enough! I've combed through nineteen and discovered that there are only nineteen. The indignity. But your story is amazing, and I do agree with what you mean by them not having done anything like most of us TIVA fans want them to do in Paris.
I love your opening line, by the way. It's classic Ziva before Tony steps in and snowballs her. That's what's so great about them-the endless possibilities. And your writing is great. It has this romantic twist on Hemingway in it.
But I also wanted to let you know that I added your story to my c2, which is devoted entirely to interpretations of Jet Lag. I actually have plans to get more authors to contribute Jet Lag fics and create a big beautiful bubble of Tony and Ziva in Paree happiness.
I can only hope that you subscribe out of support for this couple that we know and love so much. Because my ultimate goal, after all, is to make Jet Lag recognized as the BEST episode of NCIS (to date).
| brightblue chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
"His eyes seemed to deepen when he buried himself inside her." Oh, so lovely! Beautifully done! So many Paris fics, but it's so fun to see everyone's take on it! Great job!
| Elizzzybeth chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Beautiful! I loved it.
| Megwolf13 chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
I like it. I do agree with them probably not having sex in Paris, but who knows (except for the makers!)
| wildfirefanatic08 chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
WOW! I absoultly LOVED IT! Just added it to my favorites. Great job!
| Betherzz chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
absolutely love it! just wish there was a bit more conversation between the two of them, even though they have a whole lotta "eye sex" (think thats what mcgee calls it) cause i would love to know what the hell made him wait till after midnight to go over to her place, would love to know what was said between the 2 after gibbs walked away from that bullpen and mcgee was in mtac. and i would love to see him hand her that picture in black & white in a nice frame or her see it somewhere in his apartment black & white in a nice frame someplace that would signify that the person in that picture is more than a partner or a friend. thank you for this story i really loved it (not to racy, could have been one of the ones you need to open the window and let the -20 degree breeze in for and a cup of coffee LOL) thanks again :)
| Birdie79 chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
That was a great story!
I dont think that they slept together but its still nice to pretend they finally took the next step...
| slurmina chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
very sweet story...more compliments!
| Gemcity08 chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
I'm not positive they slept together in Paris either, but I LOVE your take on it. Very well written and descriptive. Nice job :)