Reviews for Loner
SleepMyBella chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
Wow! What an amazing chapter! This is such an incredible story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
letempspasse chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
omfg. if i were edward i would sneak into his room and take him out kill bill style.

holy shit. it doesn't even matter that we don't have the "whole story" yet. that james fucker needs to die. i hope he comes out of the coma so he can be dealt with appropriately. namely, suffering to his LAST BREATH.

lol yikes but child molesters should be afforded no second chance. EVER.

i hope bella has invested in a good pair of big girl pants.

can't wait for the next!
Santiva Potter chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
Nice update. I cant wait for more.

Much Love

Santiva Potter
MarieCullenx chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
Wow that was amazing and intense looking forward to the next update :]
Edward's Eternal chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
My heart breaks for Edward.. and Bella- can she be strong enough...

Carlisle and Esme- trying so hard to do the right thing- caught between a rock and a hard place I would say...

So well written.. enjoying this a lot...
Tropical Sorbet chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
I was so missing my update. This is a story I jump to read instantly. I am so glad you didn't wait for the validation beta at twilighted. Please hurry back with the next update. That cliffie was brutal. I love the connection you created between Edward and Bella and how she is the only one he will let touch him. Please hurry back.
fandangopink chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
fantastic! keep up the good work!
Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
I'm thinking this is what's called a "transitional chapter". It's gonna help us get from point A to point B. Am I right?

Edward's gonna - slowly - realize that James can't hurt him ever again? And he'll - slowly . . . and with Bella's help, of course - begin to let the anger against James go?

Maybe he'll even ask to go visit James in the hospital and tell off the man's unconscious self? Really let him have it, verbally, when there's absolutely no threat of James retaliating in any way at all?

-Q
Darcyfitz1 chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
Oh, God. Poor, dear Edward. He's going to have to face some serious demons, alright. Let that bastard die, and rot in hell, rightfully so! It will never replace what Edward lost, but justice will be served! BTW, what happened to his useless mother? I really hope Bella will be able to comfort him; he's on shaky ground right now, and it's iffy he might blow up at her. Once again, you've delivered the goods. LOL...Yeah, I missed an update like crazy. Thanks for posting it here.
ele05gs chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
O.M.F.G!

That was mean of you! cliffhanger, I hate cliffhangers! lol

I may or may not be about to cry now...

AMAZING chapter! loved everything of it, EPOV was heartbreaking...

I just hope Bella goes after hirm, or he goes after her...

OMG! Please update soon!

Luv, -E.
AlexaET chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
Nilla u almost make me choke on my sandwich that was cold already for having it mid air with my mouth hang open for like a minute! OMG woman, ur mean! Hahahahaha but nice mean, not ugly mean so take it as a compliment hahahahaha...

Well I really loved this chapter, first of all I had the oportunity to be in the mind of my Loner Edward who I adore... and it's great to know what happen from both of them at the same time in the same chapter, I mean sometimes the writers like to put in one chapter the POV of one and next chapter the other POV but of the same scene and it gets kind of boring cause as a reader you want to move forward not get stuck in the same stuff... yeah is cool to know what is going trough everyones mind but if you must add it is better to do it in the same chapter so the story flowws...at least that is my opinon, so I really loved what you did!

I'm so glad that it was not that much of a bad news! I mean I get what Edward got all upset but I'm also really pleased that James is not a treat to him so far! Hope he stays in the coma really! Don't want him back at all!

I really don't get why Carlisle had to ruin the dinner I mean it was not as if James was coming the next day so he could have waited for next morning or whatever, but ok maybe that is what was needed for Edward to let it all out and maybe it will actually help for him to open up to Bella!

I'm so glad u read my reviews and like them! I really love ur story dearly and think ur an amazing writer! My admiration goes to you!

Yupi! Can't wait for next chapter :D! Enjoy ur day and the almost weekend :D
fvprosey chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
Good for Carlisle. I think he is acting in Edward's best interest. Hopefully one day Edward will see that too. Thanks for the update.
Evangeline the Gothic Angel chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
Well dang.

I'm so glad for this new chapter. Thanks!
notreal17 chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
so he rushed out of the room... but not out of the house. i hope he wants to see bella because i think that if he doesnt and she comes to him anyway then he will just push her away... i cant wait to see how everyone handles this new news... what would be really nice to see would be bella being able to comfort him and clam him down and for carlisle and esme to see the effect she has on him, but idk if that big of a revelation is ready to come up yet...
Parker137 chapter 26 . 3/11/2010
So heartbreaking, really... just when I thought they might make some progress. I hope E lets B at least comfort him a bit after hearing that news. Wonderful writing. Thank you!
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