|Reviews for Loner|
| SirenSymphony chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
Heartbreaking, but I can't stop reading it. Very well written, great work.
| SleepMyBella chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
What a beautiful chapter! It made me get a little teary-eyed. :) Thank you!
| SumFun chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
I really enjoyed this story! I can't wait for more!
| hooker81 chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
I'm hooked on this story! love it!
| Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
WOW - How did you pack so much progress into such a short amount of space?
Love it, love it, love!
| ExploitingReality chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
So, as I sat at work this afternoon, looking for relief from the never-ending tedium, I happened upon your story. And wow.
I was a little reluctant to proceed after that first author's note, because some people feel the need to show abuse almost too graphically, but you have seriously blown me away.
This is amazing! I like how, 23 chapters into this, we haven't reached resolution to what is a very serious problem. There wasn't a plot bandaid by chapter 10, making things all better, as I've seen a lot. We still have an emotionally scarred Edward, who is terrified of letting one in, and Bella's smile, no matter how pretty, can't immediately fix everything.
I'm really looking forward to finding out how this is going to turn out. :) Please update soon.
| Blue Tenshi chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
Aw... Bella and Edward are just so cute! So happy that Bella is making progress! Thanks for the update. )
| Bronzehairedgirl620 deleted chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
Since we're nearing getting caught up on Fanfiction, I thought I'd send my love, since I don't on Twilighted. (I just can't figure the site out. haha.)
I love it. You know this. Edward and his past kill me, but it truly is beautifully written and I'm excited to see how it progresses. I also strangely enjoy the Emmett parts in general. It's interesting to see how he stands up for Edward though he comes off as indifferent other times.
Alright, I'll stop my rambling. But fabulous job, and I can't wait for more. 3
| mamemimomu123 chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
I LOVE this story! Edward breaks my heart, he is so vulnerable. but i'm happy to see that he's starting to listen to people, to bella. please update soon! this is too interesting!
| AlexaET chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
Hey Nilla, my review at FanFic cause I just like to review double hahahaha...
Amazing chapter, it was really worth all the wait, it was great and more cause it was written from Edward's POV and I just love when is his mind we are listening the story to. I really dont' understand how can you write so well all the things that go trough his head, I mean is just so illogical all his self-loathing feelings, but when I read it from his mind it just makes sense the way he feels, even the bit when he say it will break him to know that James did all he did just for his plesure pruposes and not because he was bad, wow... it really makes me think, yeah that would be even worse, to know he actually didn't deserve what he got! So wow...it's just so good...
I was listening to Coldplay's "Fix You" while reading the part of the touching and OMG I was hyperventilating, it was just my luck cause I didn't even notice that song was playing until the chapter was over and I was gasping for air, yeah I'm kind of dramatic, but hey I'm mexican and I've watch lot's of soup operas in my life so yeah I'm overly-dramatic.
You got me worried there for a sec. when I read the "warning" I was like when you got a horror movie and have your face cover but pick between your fingers, cause I really didn't want to know much about that good-for-nothing SOAB James! But as always you know how to write it and even tough it was hard and a little bit disturbing it was ok! So there...
I have a question, is Elizabeth the mom? Cause I've been reading in the forum they refer to her as the mom, but I haven't actually read in the story her name, Edward has always just say "mom" as far as I remember, and when in one chapter they mentioned Victoria I kind of guessed she was the mother, cause she is James' partner...anyways...maybe she is the lawyer, uh we will have to discover that...
I'm so happy of the closeness between this two, is just so amazing! I was so happy when at the end Edward was starting with his bad toughts and Bella's words came back to him, maybe he is really starting to understand, it wasn't his fault, I know there is a long way to go but doesn't matter!
Ok, enough cause is getting big!
Have a nice week Nilla :D!
| Edward's Eternal chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
OMG I am actually weepy. He is so lost and alone. She is trying so hard for him.
James- bastard should be shot- drawn and quartered and driven over by a truck- many many times...
oh sorry was that outloud ?
| Team Switzerland678 chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
i loved it!bella and edward getting closer me likey!
| BelenGre chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
Poor Edward ):
So many bad things happened to him ):
| Parker137 chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
Yes, part of this was hard to read, but you handled it well as you have in previous chapters. Edward's self loathing is so sad and I can't decide if Bella is optimistic/hopeful or acting out of compassion... maybe it's a bit of both. I just wanted Edward to pull her into a hug which will probably happen with baby steps. Thank you!
| EisleyGirl chapter 23 . 2/23/2010
love love love love this! please update soon!