Reviews for Foul Balls and Phone Calls
dazzled eyes22 chapter 1 . 2/3
I found this story thanks to Joanne Riddy at .

I loved how Bella and Edward's relationship started. That was so hot. I just loved the voicemails and Edward's sexy traffic stop. It lost a little steam at the end, but I would love to read more about these two. Hope you did well in the contest.
anafinchel chapter 1 . 2/7/2016
AWWW man! I actually want to see Charlie's reaction the over one year relationship! this totally deserves another chapter! pretty please!

IT WAS HILARIOUS! I loved it!
timidvampire chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
hahahahahhaha! Loved this !
snoopylover60 chapter 1 . 1/31/2015
Oh please continue this! Its too good to end it here!
MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
Hilarious and also really cute :)
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
That was very funny . . . especially the voice messages they left for each other. Loved when he pulled her over . . . just really great visual on that whole part. The never making further than the other side of the door, the first night he went to her home. I love the sneaking around and the end result. You almost, just almost, wonder if Edward gave Charlie the phone on purpose . . . knowing she'd answer in their unique fashion . . . otherwise, he would've called her and handed the phone to her after. Loved it!
momma2fan chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
OMG! That would suck. Any plans to continue this little adventure?
Katy dazzledbythe Cullens chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
This was awesome.

Loved it

Katy.
gmd028 chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Loved it!
The Unfamiliar chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
Great one shot! Loved it! :)
LillianBroderick chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Love it
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
lmao- that was funny!
edla chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
lmao! I sure hope this will not stay just a one shot lol its too good not to go further with it
Evelyne-raconte chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
MOUAHAHAHA ! Very nice OS, I appreciate it a lot; Thank you.
mzcullen58 chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Looking forward to reading more please.
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