Reviews for Foul Balls and Phone Calls
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
omg...that was great! totally FML! lol. thanks for sharing!
pamaroo chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Loved this hot little story :-)
Irish Charm chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
After reading accidentally in love I decided to check out some of your other stories. I have to say you are a great writer.

This story was great. It's something else that you could of expanded if you had wanted to.
VampChick76 chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
I love the one-shot! This is hilarious!

~Xela
Stargazer1364 chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
I laughed so effing hard at the end! D D D OH MAN! LMFAO! LMAO! ROTFLMFAO! Darn straight. D
hippie starr chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
That was awesome! I would love to see this one turned into a full story.
Em3rald.Arch3r chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I hope there's another installment, because I thought the story was pretty damn good.
Duchess Michelle chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Great o/s! I love it!
Always Confused chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
Oh, noooo! I would move to another country! Bye the way, great story...
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
That was really cute. And really funny.
TwilightNJonas4Ever chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
LMAO. Loved this entire one shot :) so hilarious! Amazing job :)
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
So i see this one is not complete? Hmm, lol! Okay well lets get to reading this story too! Oh and i love the Banner very cute!

Haha, Oh this is very good, I love them together and they have only just met, they are too cute! Hahaha! Corniest pick up line i have ever heard and i have a friend that is a master at them. Hahaha, okay i stand corrected the Bella told was equally as corny! Hahaha, Its hilarious that the guys fuck with her cause they know her car, even more funny that its Edward! 'That was a total set up to get my address! He was smooth.' Holy shit he is smooth. Oh i love these little games they keep playing. Haha, I love his second line. Oh so funny! They crack me up! OMG It was her dad. Oh no! This is bad. "As great as Edward always fucked me, sometimes life did it better." I love that line! Its the best!

Anyways i really really loved this! And i think you should continue it cause it is seriously incredible! It was marvelous and i just want so much more! Hahaha, And i love your prompt it was too cute! So off i go for now! Im gonna miss your Twilight writing! D

~Ashley~
Lulabell75 chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
I loved it! I'd love to see what happens with these two.
yo-digitty-yo-yo chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
That ending was effing funny Sweet Tea! I can just imagine Charlie's reaction to that visual. And guess what? It's my first time ever reading a Twific! I know this was posted long ago, but I visited your profile looking for the latest HE update and this summary caught my eye. Holy-sexy-lemon Batman! ;) *Looks around nervously for jelous vikings* hehehe

Fantastic story :D

*giant hugs*

Shanny
LaniLani chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA - I SOO LOVED this story!

I'm so glad I voted for you even though I hadn't read the story XD (and that I hadn't known back then either p) Now, what would be a fitting banner? Hmm, baseball, dirty cop uniforms, cellphones... I have no idea, we'll see. )
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