Reviews for Zepherus
newworldwriter1 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
cool! i liked it! 8 for originality :D
always a happy ending chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
I don't know. I think it could of been a good story if it wasn't so off character. I get the angst you were trying to create, but the whole story is off. Tony and Rhodes always have a tight relationship, there's no explanation or reason for the distance between them. And the reason for Pepper's anger & neglect is weak and for the severity of it, is out of her normal character. I found myself scanning through this towards the middle hoping I could see some turn that would justify their attitudes and correction of the blahness of the whole story, but I didn't find a spark. This just isn't memorable.
XxThe Penny TreasurexX chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Aw! You should make another chapter!