|Reviews for The Fifth Act|
| whitehound chapter 2 . 6/15
Not sure about that - Snape in the books isn't physically violent and he is always very protective of the students' physical safety, but it's quite possible Harry hasn't noticed that.
No root beer in Britain. I've been told dandelion-and-burdock is similar but you very rarely see that.
| whitehound chapter 1 . 6/14
That's very clever, to have Harry work out who took Lily's photograph and why, and I look forward to Snape's rescue.
It's a fanon myth, though, that the questions Snape asked Harry in their first class were unfair. It's made pretty clear that the questions relate to a dictionary of herbology which is one of Harry's first year texts and which he has in fact read, although apparently not with much attention; Snape has chosen items from the beginning of the alphabet to make it more likely Harry will have read that entry; and each time Harry fails to answer a question Snape replaces it with an easier one, ending with a question which could be answered by an informed Muggle. If, as I suspect, there was a subtext to do with the Language of Flowers, associating death, bitter regret and a lily then it was unfair to expect Harry to know that, but Harry didn't need to know that to answer the questions.
| Tanith Alexander chapter 6 . 5/19
I love your stories, and I have read them all before but am reading them through again, I must point out that a beta would probably help recognise mistakes such as confusion between the word conscious and conscience, I do not know if this is a case of spell check suggesting the wrong word or misunderstanding, so I apologise if you know this already; we have a conscious mind, and a sub-conscious mind, we are either conscious (awake) or unconscious (passed out or asleep), we also have a conscience which allows us to feel guilt and tells us right from wrong, if you aren't sure about a word or spelling, wiki dictionary is wonderful for that. This is intended as constructive criticism, not putting you down, I hope you keep writing as I do very much enjoy your stories.
| staar chapter 18 . 5/14
Loved it Thanks !
| Pyrane chapter 18 . 4/19
That's a very sweet story
Thanks for sharing !
| Izair chapter 18 . 4/13
This is the fourth time i re-read this story and I love it. It is beautifully written, the characters are well defined and some scenes are just hilarious. I really enjoyed it
| Fandomsdontdie chapter 18 . 4/9
Best wedding vows ever!
| Fandomsdontdie chapter 7 . 4/9
I haven't finished this chapter yet but the line. "Small, scrawny and easy to off" made me laugh so hard.
| NatalieMcLarent chapter 18 . 3/23
Wow, I like it. The romance is not too fast also not too slow. Good story!
| Fenris Jin chapter 18 . 3/20
Crazy wedding vows.. just as crazy as the bachelors party.. XD
Dudley and Luna is actually funny and cute.. Think outside the box you say? What box? XD
Welcome to Robert Prince. I love the fact that he's a Potter-Snape hybrid.. LOL. Although on the last line, I feel kind of offended for the other Houses. It's as if bravery is the only notable virtue. I know that's not what it meant, it just felt like it. XD
Great story! Awesome writing skills and imagination! Kudos! :)
| Fenris Jin chapter 17 . 3/20
Wizard over the Rainbow! XD For some reason, this does not remind me of Harry, but instead one of his friends who enjoyed the bachelor party too much! Certain person, wearing certain heels and so on. XD
I love the bonding with Dudders. It was nice to see that side of him. :)
| Fenris Jin chapter 16 . 3/20
Very sweet birthday for Severus. I feel the love. :)
The bachelor party was a blast.. Especially the heels! LOL
| Fenris Jin chapter 15 . 3/20
Aww.. They're really settling in as the Princes. It's lovely. XD
The whole of Hogwarts staff must have felt that they've been had. They had tricked the whole castle into thinking there was still bad blood between them when in truth they're shagging like rabbits. XD
These two are becoming an infamous duo, manipulating Molly to plan their wedding too. XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 14 . 3/20
Wow. He technically didn't ask Harry but Severus already had everything. The romantic setting, the talk, the ring. Very Slytherin way to propose.. XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 13 . 3/20
I like the idea of Snarry teaming up to prank unsuspecting victims. Severus is pretty diabolical and he has the brain of a genius. Harry will inject the adrenaline in their adventures.. XD
Anyway, I'd like to know how Severus met the business end of a gun before. XD