|Reviews for A Place for My Heart|
| guest chapter 1 . 3/1
I really like your OC character Caterina, as well as your portrayal of Severus. So far you have both his snarky attitude and judgmental side down. Can't wait to read the rest of your story to see what happens with their relationship!
| Guest chapter 57 . 2/2
I feel honored like Brazilian, with the choice of destination for honeymoon. A magical place indeed. I love your fanfiction. His Brazilian reader. Debby Bacellar.
| Foggy chapter 21 . 9/10/2013
I really like your story so far. It's heartwarmingly cute!
I know the story is complete, but you might consider one thing: a brit-picker. There are quite a few americanisms in your story. Sometimes your descriptions or your dialogue show a background that is obviously not British, e.g. references to baseball or the use of phrase like "kinda". I hope this is a useful tip for your writing, which I enjoy so very much.
| MyAmetRaven chapter 60 . 7/18/2013
Nice and romantic but still retained all of severus' personality. I can't believe how long it took for a real kiss.
| Bellantry chapter 13 . 7/14/2013
So far, Caterina is a Mary Sue.
1. Incredibly attractive (not normally an issue until it makes Snape go OOC)
2. Talented ballerina, fantastic singer, head of a charity (a bit much for realism in my book)
3. Snape is just overwhelmed by her right from the get go. Here is a quote from this chapter:
'But then again he had never met anyone like Caterina before. She was the only one who had ever caused such an upheaval to his mind, his feelings, his senses, his very life.'
I understand artistic license, but number three has Snape COMPLETELY OOC. What a load of rubbish. Snape was in love with Lily until the day he died. I support creativity and had you worked in that Snape was still in love with Lily but found himself attracted to Caterina and was fighting the attraction I would be thrilled. That would be much more like Snape.
You're a good writer but I won't finish the story because of the above items. Especially #3!
Please put an A/U in your disclaimer because changing Snape's feelings so radically or downplaying them make the story A/U.
| JellyWinchester chapter 28 . 7/4/2013
That was absolutely H-O-T!
| Gemini Sister chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Just found this story so will pop in and review it from time to time as I go along. Very nice beginning. VBG.
| SnapesDreamer28 chapter 60 . 12/8/2012
This was brilliant, truly brilliant! I don't know what I put off reading it for so long. Your writing it engaging and fresh and just from this chap alone you have a gift for writing children scenes. I would have loved to read much more about them interacting with Snape and Cat! It was a nice twist that the new baby not be magical. Snape reassuring her and talking to her about it was really sweet. And of course I loved the ending tease, I can definitely seen Snape rising to the challenge of sneaking his wife into the Minister's office. Thank you for writing and sharing your beautiful story. I'll be checking out your other one for sure!
| SnapesDreamer28 chapter 59 . 12/8/2012
Another great chap with so many wonderful feels! I'm in love with the twins and can picture Snape being in complete awe of them! Caterina is one lucky gal and she deserves to finally have a happy family with him! Can't believe I'm almost done this great story. Part of me wants to not read the last chap so it doesn't have to end but not knowing would kill me!
| SnapesDreamer28 chapter 58 . 12/8/2012
Glad to see Jamison gets a happy end too. How exciting to be having twins! Our Snape will be so clueless. And omg on to read about McGonagall's story, I never saw that coming!
| SnapesDreamer28 chapter 57 . 12/8/2012
I googled those falls! Absolutely breathtaking! You have no idea how much I want that place to be real, actually since you dreamt up the brilliant place you probably do! Just need the baby news now!
| SnapesDreamer28 chapter 56 . 12/8/2012
Wow what a gorgeous wedding! it was like I could actually envision it all in my head as it was happening. You really paint a beautiful picture through your details and great writing. Everything was amazing and wonderful just like they deserved it to be. Snape and Cat went through a sh!t load of crap to get to this point. Now I'm trying to guess where he's taken her!
| SnapesDreamer28 chapter 55 . 12/8/2012
Wonderful chap, and how you brought it all together with Snape's mother. Very clever idea weaving it into the story and how she used her ability to make sure her son was saved and would find happiness and love at last.
| SnapesDreamer28 chapter 54 . 12/8/2012
Omg that was an awesome chap! I loved the way everyone found out who it was that Caterina is actually with and then, back to the super hawwwt loving!
| SnapesDreamer28 chapter 53 . 12/8/2012
I think Cat has a special surprise up her sleeve. Her dress sounds stunning!