|Reviews for Hoot: the prequel|
| JesusLover13 chapter 2 . 12/28/2011
I really like this! You should definitely continue! It's great so far and I'm waiting in suspense for the next chapter. xD Haha.
So, please! Update soon!
The only criticism I have is that you there was a spelling error or two, but other than that, it's amazing! :D
You're doing a really awesome job with this! _
| MichaelPhelpsfanatic101 chapter 2 . 9/10/2011
Its good plz keep posting
| I C a big world chapter 2 . 6/25/2010
awesome story keep on writing!
| Should Really Be Sleeping chapter 2 . 2/11/2010
This is pretty cool. There are a couple of mistakes, like where everyones facing the back, you said that Mullet Fingers was 'not facing forward' which would mean that he was facing back, which would mean that he wasn't sticking out like a sore thumb. The thing with the aunt was inspired, but seemed a little... forced? It was interesting, but it was so glaringly different from the rest of the story that it seemed like something more should happen with her. Something to think about. I liked the last line. I think you captured Beatrice perfectly there, with the whole dynamic of wanting to run but was tied down by family and responsibilities. The total cheapness and fakeness of the wedding was captured perfectly, imo. Can't wait to read more!