Reviews for Revenge
viperblack chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Sounds good so far! Hope to read more though!
Artemis the Emerald Princess chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Please update! It was fantastic ans now I am in suspense.
lynsay chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
this sound good, i like it but which book is it based on? you are going to update it more?
GM01 chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Your description of Kenberly's nightmare was excellent in that it gave details that show the juxtaposition of ordinary life with foreshadowing of tragedy. The inclusion of the girl's hair was perfect. The mental debate in Kenberly's mind about choosing sanity was also excellent. It sets up the conflict necessary for a story to have depth and inner meanings. The sorrow Kenberly shows for the other human girl, Sahara, demonstrates she is still human and sane. Overall, this is very well written and I am curious to know what will happen.
anon chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
That was really good! I have not read this series but I noticed you introducing elements from the book into your story so that someone who has not read it could understand. It also shows that you're planning to write more. I hope you do. I'd like to know if Kenberly gets back at Cain!