|Reviews for Awkward Silences|
| Demeter1 chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
This is one of those so-rare fics that grabs character and exposition and tosses it into a bowl and the ending result that comes out is this amazing, amazing story about how this motley crew of people got to know each other... and I felt the little tender aches, like how Vossler never got a chance to brush her hair, how Fran's works got more and more intricate, and how you tied her hair into their sorrow and then into their friendship.
| Apakoha chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
Holy cow, this was awesome. It covers a lot of character-building, events in the game and emotional ground, so kudos to you, it was excellent.
| Jewel Song chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
I love this little gem of a story! I think your characterizations are spot on - and the idea behind it is wonderful. Great job!
| Slavka13748 chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
OK, so I read this yesterday and didn't review. Why? Because I'm lazy and I was on my PSP, which is a pain to type on. But then I came back, and saw you still had no reviews, so I thought, why not? I know how annoying it can be to put something up and get no feedback.
Anyway, on with the actual review! I very much like the idea behind this one-shot, as I've always seen Penelo as sort of the one person that kept everyone sane after all the party have been through. I mean, she had to have some purpose, right? Thanks to this, you manage to make the scenarios seem as if they could have happened within the game.
I also enjoyed the overall writing style of the piece, and it seems to fit in with the style of the game. However, I would watch out for overly long and convoluted sentences - I'm guilty of it myself, and it's a minor issue at most, but I've got to give a little constructive criticism, no?
So, to sum it all up: I enjoyed it, I've added to my favourites, and I hope you write more!