|Reviews for The Holiday's|
| il0vesunfl0wers chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Ahahahahaha! This was a riot! Usually it's hard to get a large group to interact without it falling to pieces, so good job. The only thing I would suggest for improvement is the second part of the last sentence.
"All of the HiME’s turned their heads toward each other, having their proof."
It's already obvious by that time that they had their proof, so to drive it home, you could use something else here to pack more punch and make it funnier somehow.
Other than that, I really enjoyed this! )
| Minagi Mikoto chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Hm! A Christmas story! Sorry for the late review!
Well, I have no problem with posting a Christmas story in anytime. What matters is that when you feel to write about the thing. So don't be sad!
Actually this story seemed a bit weird to me! Like a drunk Haruka? Me calling Akira "Akira-sama"? OK, I hope it doesn't sound like flaming! But Mai, "Arika" and me were fun! And most of the characters behavior were believable!
I'm waiting to read your other stories, specially chapter 5 of "Dearest person"! Do your best! Hm!
| NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 2/1/2010