|Reviews for The Hunt|
| chartwilightmom chapter 2 . 1/20
even this was written years ago, it still rocks, nicely done, hot!
thanks for sharing
| LaPetitRose chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
That was SO hot. 'nuff said.
| Lilith Leazman chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
I read this so long aog and loved it, and just happened across it again.
Wonderful Lemon, really gets the blood pumping. _
| CindyWindy chapter 2 . 5/1/2012
Bore me to tears? Are you crazy? You wrote this awhile back so I hope by now you realize what a fine writer you are! :)
This was enjoyable and so sexy. Hoorah for long-married couples still having fun in the bedroom, er, forest!
| Smartmouth62 chapter 2 . 2/25/2012
| Smartmouth62 chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
My first thought was that this was James (the hunter) and Victoria, but then realized they would not have golden eyes. I dismissed Em and Rose, because she is older than him. I also dismissed Alice and Jasper because this female vamp has long hair. So, I came up with Carlisle and Esme or Edward and Bella. The speaker seemed more Edward-y, than Carlisle-y but I decided to withhold my guess until I get a few more clues.I have to wait for the 2nd chapter.
| SanguineTaurean chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
Bore us with this story? I think not! It was just too yummy!
| SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
I don't know who this couple is and at this point it doess't matter because this is sexy as hell!
| Twiggalina chapter 2 . 8/21/2011
I enjoyed this two shot a lot!
| twilusted chapter 2 . 6/26/2011
What? Bored to tears? I'm freaking on edge right now. Must locate the husband soon. I'm sure he wouldn't mind some smexin in the rain and mud lol.
I knew it was Edward and Bella! 'She was young and he was faster' gave me a clue it was them. But I loved the ambiguity of these lovers identities through your writing. It could have been any of the other canon vegetarian couples.
This two-shot was intensely satisfying and remarkably gratifying. I'm going to be sure to read all your other fics as soon as I'm done with the muddy smackdown with Le Hubs!
| twilusted chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Gah, that was fuckawesome! Sex in the mud is a lot sexier with your descriptive wordplay. I think it may be Edward and Bella but have a hunch it may be Rosalie and Emmett. *scrambles to next chappy to find out*
| Koshivuh chapter 2 . 1/23/2011
Well, I'm happy I was assuming correctly :D I loved this, it was wonderfully great.
| Koshivuh chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Well, I've been picturing Edward and Bella this whole time, so I hope that's not ruined in the end q-q
| BoydBlog chapter 2 . 11/11/2010
OMG OMG. I needed a little window to get out of the oppressiveness of 'work'. Phew, now I'm all hot for Edward (story of my life really) but still...
I know you posted this a while ago, but still I have something to say - apart from my review which is: Totally exquisite piece of writing, that transported me into the forest and, let me tell you, mud has never been desirable, but in this context, it's heavenly.
"Can I ask one thing?"
"It's not my birthday, but will you please stop self-deprecating your ability and talent in your author notes?"
Edward shrugged his acquiescence, and lowered his face to mine. He drew a line across my cheekbone with the tip of his nose, inhaling lightly, before pressing his lips to mine in a hungry kiss.
(there is Nothing wrong with purple patches and HEA's are what we LIVE and read for!) SeriLOLously!
| swimom7 chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
I loved your 'boring canon HEA' - ahem...I err... love it. :)
Seriously though, your descriptions, the squelching mud, the slapping...everything was beautiful.