|Reviews for Adventures in the Prefects' Bath|
| YaGHeofttHaeLubvit216 chapter 1 . 3/8
I've just finished reading all the existing reviews.
Most have expressed their feelings quite well and I'm finding myself hard pressed to add anything unique.
Hermione was a fair bit more confident in herself after waking Harry up from his dream. It's been too many years since I was involved with a 15 yo in any way (other than as dad) to judge the beliveability but since this is, after all, fiction I'll just smile and say, Nice!
Harry, being a hero and needing to show his stoutness through the stories is yet uncertain enough to save the story from being Adult man of confidence in a teenager's body.
As I think that most good stories seek to draw us into them to where we can imagine ourselves in their places is one of the reasons that I thing that the Harry Potter series is so popular with both youth as well as adult readers.
I greatly enjoyed the stories I've read thus far and will continue to work my way through your offerings.
| missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
You do love those sexy bath scenes! You must have been born under one of the water signs - Cancer, Scorpio, or Pisces. ;)
| Hpfanboy31800 chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Wow I loved it all and it works especially well if you read this right before year 5 of when harry met hermione. I loved them both thank you for sharing and keep up the amazing work
| Deathday Party Planner chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Chem prof - As you say, far-fetched, and not at all what I expected. Anyway, thank you for sharing your story.
| Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
MON DIEU?! 19th C. France?! It's 17TH C.! Set in the 1600's, remember!? Charles I is supposedly the English monarch of the time...
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
| Jason chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
This is great please continue it
| MMWillow13 chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
| Majerus chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Pretty steamy stuff there at the end :)
A fun read, you are great research material for HHr that is the mid-end of my story in progress (in editing) and as mentioned, just a lot of fun to read :)
| Penghost chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Your interpretation and storyline thereafter is well thought out, as always i may say, but i miss some decorations which you usually spend quite freely.
For one Dobby and Myrtle! I also think Fudge should have been embarrassed a lot more and rather publicly in my opinion. Slap the git.
You handled the development of the twos relationship very nicely. Although the description of their interaction where ways to short for my liking. As you very well know the numerous little details make the perfect picture.
So eough complaints. I liked this story very much because i kan quite follow and see that it coud have worked. Well done
| ReluctantMudblood chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I wish the cup had been played out like that, would have made so much more sense!
| edboy4926 chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Awesome story. Weird, but good. Keep up the good work.
| Slie Amos chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Yes, I like the way Harry changes once he and Hermione get together after the initial 'dream' of Harry's.
Also well written and it flowed well for me. Thanks for this one.
| Aramis chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Hey, Dumas,the Three Musketeers is set in the seventeenth century.
| Bladre MKT chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
the final was not thaaaat far feched just a lil liveral XD but the idea is a verey apealing one, start with a dream and make harry act logicaly, nice way to work it out!