| Reviews for The Diner |
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   Jaygm chapter 23 . 2/20/2013 Well, what the hell happened to James? That loser had better either be caught or dead. Sounds like he beat the crap out of her. |
| Jaygm chapter 22 . 2/20/2013 Story is great but this chapter was very depressing. James is cruel and relentless. Hope she can figure out something. |
| Jaygm chapter 21 . 2/20/2013 Geez- that Edward- just jumping to conclusions and saying things before he thinks. And Bella has now been gone for several days with that slimeball, James. Every day she's gone, the worse it is going to be. |
| Jaygm chapter 20 . 2/20/2013 These two are quite a pair- and now James has Bella. |
| Jaygm chapter 19 . 2/20/2013 So it was Alice's idea? Telling lies for whatever reason is not a good idea. I am just waiting for James to let Bella know they are still married. She really should have checked on this when Charlie mentioned it a few chapters back. The fact that her divorce may not have gone through is critical. |
| Jaygm chapter 16 . 2/19/2013 Good for her- she let him hear her secrets and he didn't pull away. This is a huge accomplishment for her. Now let's just hope James doesn't show his slimy face. |
| Jaygm chapter 15 . 2/19/2013 The communication between these two is maddening. They both always seem to have excuses for not just getting it all aired out. |
| Jaygm chapter 14 . 2/19/2013 Well- good to see they said the words to each other. Moving along nicely. |
| Jaygm chapter 13 . 2/19/2013 Bella just needs to unload the story on Edward. At least now he has the gist of it- thank goodness that Alice let him in on that much. |
| Jaygm chapter 12 . 2/19/2013 OMG! Finally. . . now she just has to tell Edward. It was so foolish of her to keep this to herself. James could be very dangerous. |
| Jaygm chapter 11 . 2/19/2013 She needs to tell Edward and it wouldn't hurt to tell Charlie. Good grief, she could be in serious trouble if James decides to come and get her. And he knows where she is- it's her dad's home after all. |
| Jaygm chapter 10 . 2/19/2013 Great story so far. I am finding myself yelling at Bella that she is putting herself in worse danger by not telling people about James. If he does come for her, the chances of finding her will be slim to none since she hasn't notified the cops or Edward who definitely could be looking out for her. Dumb, dumb girl- just like those people in horror shows who do the one thing guaranteed to get them killed. LOL. |
| Jojo657 chapter 26 . 1/30/2013 Awwww wow I've read this whole story and this has been a wonderful experience |
| Katy posh chapter 26 . 1/25/2013 Great. I loved your story... |
| piccolover22 chapter 25 . 1/18/2013 Love it! |