Reviews for The Diner
VryUnique chapter 4 . 11/26/2023
When Edward threw a fit last chapter Bella should have asked him if he was going to pay her.
Waitress mostly make tips so if Bella was going to bake instead her pay would go way down
unless Rosalie compensated her for it.
Bella should probably hold off on the flirting since she is married. What does she plan on doing
about that? File for divorce? I'm going to assume he will show his face eventually unless her
leaving was agreed upon. Did she sneak off?
VryUnique chapter 3 . 11/26/2023
Edward did sound and act like an ass.
Poor Bella. I could see her quitting.
Edward needs to man up and apologize.
VryUnique chapter 2 . 11/26/2023
Abused! It's easy to condemn the woman for putting up with that treatment
but I know that it is not black and white. It's a slow progression from being
happy to thinly veiled insults, to finally being slapped around and controlled.
VryUnique chapter 1 . 11/26/2023
How uncomfortable, to come home with your tail between your legs.
A bad breakup seems like the most acceptable and logical reason to
come home instead of not being able to make it financially.
Guest chapter 21 . 10/13/2023
Does Embry know Bella missing?
Guest chapter 14 . 10/13/2023
Is she still married? They were driving home drunk
Guest chapter 12 . 10/13/2023
Will she tell Jasper and Emmett?
Guest chapter 5 . 10/12/2023
Bella is married right? Why did Embry have to leave?
Guest chapter 2 . 10/12/2023
Is Bella still married?
sue1zide chapter 3 . 9/8/2022
Edward seems to have some type of issue/disability? My first guess was that he suffered from something that caused him to have memory blackouts. Or something traumatic happened while he was in Chicago but he at one point owned or was a Chef in a high end kitchen.
What are everyone’s ages, please? Thank you.
Lyndseyxx chapter 1 . 3/2/2021
After rereading this after a few years, I’ve realised that there a few things in here which are really problematic. One of the biggest issues is that when Bella shares how she feels (often blaming herself or generally thinking negatively of herself) both Alice and Edward completely shut her down, even to the point where they basically threaten her if she speaks that way again. Not speaking about it won’t stop someone feeling a certain way, stopping her talking about how she feels would do more harm than good. Also the fact that Charlie and Edward keep their info on James to themselves is so completely wrong, and I don’t think that’s ever fully addressed. Bella and Edward’s relationship also has a lot of red flags for me, it comes across as very unhealthy and them getting married so quickly feels wrong. Although it’s really well written, I think there’s some worrying messaging in here about how to support a survivor of domestic violence.
Sassyvampmama chapter 26 . 11/30/2020
Thanks for sharing this with us.
dreamthief19 chapter 26 . 9/1/2020
What a lovely story! Thank you for sharing!
divyvicki chapter 26 . 6/7/2020
Loved this! Great story!
divyvicki chapter 25 . 6/7/2020
Glad she got closure from James!
2,587 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 13 .. Last Next »