|Reviews for One Ending is the Start of a New Beginning|
| YaoiFanLover759 chapter 13 . 2/6
The only thing i have to say is that your lemons are very predictable. I've read all of your stories and every lemon is basically the same thing. I would like one that's different. Also, i would like to read some between the other characters like Ryou and Bakura. The only ones that hasn't been with Yugi and Yami or Atem and Heba was in Musical Hearts with the two parents. So, could you please change something up a little bit, that would be awesome.
| Chaos Twin of Destruction chapter 40 . 8/30/2014
Nice ending. Hope you keep up the good work! :D
| Chaos Twin of Destruction chapter 14 . 8/30/2014
I loved this chapter because I'm Jamaican! :D
| Amanda27A.g chapter 40 . 4/22/2014
this was a very good and interesting story.
| YamiYugiandAtem chapter 40 . 8/31/2013
I love this story
and I Love all the chapters
having nosebleed in Lemon scene :D
| Thatstrangeplacecalledmymind chapter 5 . 8/17/2013
Uhh. Just letting you know. You put Yugi shit the door behind him. It's shut. Not shit. Shut.
| UnorthodoxDreamer chapter 5 . 8/15/2013
"Yami then left, and Yugi shit the door behind him."
I laughed so hard at this! XD typos are awesome! I just thought you should know. This is great by the way. Your doing amazing, keep it up.
| sparkplug the fox chapter 9 . 6/14/2013
I'm used to sreaming not enough detail at people you have too much in the wrong places! You dont have to say -name- said after every line from them if you have it worded right its easy to know whos talking
| sparkplug the fox chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
You tend to repet yourself a lot be careful of that
| sparkplug the fox chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
An entresting start
| darksky.kristine26 chapter 40 . 2/28/2013
You know what's really freaky? The only difference between mine and Yugi's last baby's name is the spelling.
How's that for weird?
| YuugiYY chapter 5 . 1/20/2013
You know when Yami went to Yugi's house to ask him if he could move in? well when Yami left you put shit instead of shut
| Mukuro234 chapter 40 . 1/9/2013
I loved reading this like most of your other stories
| MissOblivious chapter 8 . 11/19/2012
Darn and here I was thinking that yugi was going to have a horror based nightmare and jump into bed with yami... boo no cuddles lol ;)
| MizuYamazai chapter 26 . 8/13/2012
I love it.