Reviews for A Brutal Teacher |
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A shade of grey91 chapter 26 . 3/3/2011 well, that definetly took the edge off needing to read what happens next. (still aching to see that gang killed though...) I was soo glad this chapter came out, I immediatly rushed to read it. When the stranger helped him, untying the blind fold to reveal that it was not his brother I was glad, I figured that someone in that horrendous gang would have mixed feelings about all that, they are still human afterall and not all of them can be evil. Still, if it bothers the man to see a child tortured, but he still intends to do whatever the president orders done to them (which obviously wont be pleasant.) what could have happened to him in the past that he hates the remnants so much? did they kill him while they were still alive? stupid fool, he'd better get over it before yazoo goes all jenova on his- anyway, it was great, there was a small mispelling in this sentence. "He gulped greedily at the liquid, ignoring he stinging in his side" LOL im also glad you found that me burning my breakfast was an honor, (it tasted good anyways) I could go on and on about how cute loz's and yazoo's brotherly bond is,but im probably running out of words so I'll end it here. great job! |
DaeSiggil chapter 25 . 2/25/2011 Yush it is O: xD I think my own internet is trying to do everything to stop me from using it as it should be used. Namely reading awesome fanfics and trying (in vain if my late review is to be believed after the review button "magically" broke) to review for it. Of course one wants to know what the other is guessing! But we're still being cruel and guard our thoughts and such till the very end when it can be revealed. *snickers* Hahah! It isn't much different from what one would've expected He's always been the kind to play as the wild card~ *echoes evil laugh* This chapter was so cute in a way *laughs* I especially loved the last part for a reason, maybe because I'm fond of the middle Remnant for reasons I don't know myself... and to see Yazoo forcing himself to care. D'aww~ As again, I loved this chapter very, very much! I can't wait to read more and see if my suspicions are to be proven correct :) |
A shade of grey91 chapter 25 . 2/15/2011 oh...*sniffle* I darn near cried when they started making poor little Loz walk after spanking him like that! I hope Yazoo kills them! Slowly preferably...can they die? they are already dead I suppose... this might make killing them alittle complicated... Your work is improving, once it was just captivating and enthralling, now I couldn't even pry my eyes away to keep my pancakes/french toast from burning! and it was completely involuntary, my muscles turned traitor, especially my eyes, couldn't look away if my life (or cooking) depended on it! every time I read this, it makes me sooo glad that I had found this awesome story, your incomprehensible ability to describe everything, emotions, landscapes, people, it's wonderful. The only thing I regret is that Square Enix hasn't read this and made it the offical sequal! anyway, awesome chapter, now my life is not complete until the next chapter comes up...and the next and the next. but please take your time, my life's completion can wait, Rome wasn't built in a day. . |
Afuri chapter 25 . 2/14/2011 Yeeaaah fighto Yazoo! www~ update soon, please! /d |
DamonWesker chapter 25 . 2/8/2011 Boy this chapter was intense! Poor Loz, he's getting brutally abused, isn't he? Damn those vicious bastards! It seems the old President has gathered the worst of Shinra to work for him in the after-life. 'Cause, honestly, I don't think that all Turks were that nasty. Tseng, Reno and Rude are some of my most favorite FFVII characters. Even Rufus has turned out better than his father. Although, for a while there, he was actually worse. He's had a change of heart since his near-death experience. Let's hope it lasts. Anyway, back to the story. I'm glad Yazoo's finally on their trail, and that he finally learned how to see the world around him. That certainly helps. What I'm wondering now is, will Sephiroth ever get his confidence back enough to fight? Poor Seph...will he ever become whole again? Not until he can defeat his evil copy, right? Isn't that where his tongue went, to make his evil twin? I've been wondering about that. Well, I'm looking forward once again to the next chapter of this intriguing tale. TTFN! ;D |
BMIK chapter 25 . 2/8/2011 Hehe, woooot! When I have a bit more time I might sit down and try to do something that shows a bit of the story, like a complete scene or so. I am just not very good with those _ Or I need a proper model... Anyways, good chapter, poor Loz! It seems that the people in the Lifestream are one angry, aggressive and brutal bunch :( But at least Loz and Seph found a way to communicate now! And yay, Yazoo learned to see, he's making progress! I hope he finds them soon before something even worse happens *worries* |
natzilla chapter 25 . 2/2/2011 poor poor Loz ! you sadist ! in the end of the chapter, I was actually thirsty :D haaa, so its Rufus father. Of course, I had forgotten about him ! but, Im ashamed to admit it but Id rather see Loz having a bad time than Yaz... ummm.. |
Annegwish chapter 25 . 2/1/2011 New chapters always rock my world! So, it seems like things are moving along well now, my favorite part of this chapter was Yazoo's bit at the end. I love how he's overcoming his self pity to realize that his brother is important to him. It's like he's coming out of his cloud of misery (hahah. I know, I'm horribly punny). That his focus is so narrow and so focused on Loz should hopefully convince once and for all that indeed, his older brother cares for him very much. It's just so heart touching I can't even stand how cute it is. Anyway, I know you've been busy and all, don't worry about being persona incommunicado. RL is busy for me, too. I'm just glad that you manage to squeeze in writing for ABT as much as you have otherwise I would be unhappy. I think I speak for all of us fangirls (er, and boys too) when I say we would all cry a lot if you didn't finish this story. So, keep on writing! You don't want me to cry, do you? Er, and I would enter the fan drawing, but . . . . it's a fact. While I am talented in many things, drawing is not one of them. Try as I might I can't make what I see in my head turn into something I see on a canvas, so I don't bother anymore. Bummer, I know. If I did draw I totally would. But I don't, so I won't. Don't you make me cry. *shakes fist* Keep on typing. |
TerrorInYerTub chapter 24 . 1/16/2011 Oh... poor Loz. TT But great chapter. The others have been great too, I've just been lazy about reviewing. Oh, so do we just make a pic and send you the URL of it or what? Cause I got a cool idea fer a picture. Well, til the next time. Terror out! X3 |
BMIK chapter 24 . 1/13/2011 Okay, first off, I rpomise that I will scan that damn picture for the art contest for yout THIS WEEKEND! Gawddammit, how lazy and confused can one person be -.- Secondly, I luffed the new chapter At first I was a bit confused as to why Yazoo got so angry, but then it dawned on me that he hadn't known that he was a remnant (here I must admit that I think it is a bit inconsistent with the movie, where Kadaj at least knows that they are 'remnants' and that with the reunion Sephiroth will come back). Now he feels betrayed, poor thing, but he was really mean and he can't always be pampered ;P Go Loz, let your brother sulk for a bit and hope that he comes back... or not. I liked the idea of Loz, Yazoo and Kadaj being literal parts of Sephiroth, that made sense and was a nice plot surprise Also enjoyed Loz' dream sequence, it was very vivid! Now I wonder what will happen of course and if Yazoo will come to the rescue or if he keeps sulking to the end of times XDD |
A shade of grey91 chapter 24 . 1/9/2011 NOOOOO! curse you cliffhangers! well, this is going to bother me until the next chapter comes out, great job as always . I love the part where they find out wich body part they are and the symbolic meaning to each. Heh, i was in the middle of reading that part, and tried to explain it to my brother who had wondered what i was reading. I butchered the poetry of the meanings and he stared at me like i was crazy... anyway, im glad this has sooo many reviews, it usually spurs writers to update quickly (no pressure .") hm..so rufus's dad found them, i was actually kind of relieved to read that it was just him, i thought it was that one fat pervert in the beginning of final fantasy 7, i cant remember his name, i just remember that when you make cloud dress as a girl, he chose cloud! above the other actual females! ( he almost kissed him too!) anyway enough rambling on my part. I didn't notice any errors, and your work was as enthralling as ever, the only points i would minus from this chapter was that horrendous CLIFF HANGER! ( grr, I thought we were past all this..) kidding aside great job. |
Afuri chapter 24 . 1/9/2011 poooor sephyyy *-* Yazoo you should help them quicky! Dx Lol I read your note bout people who mad at kadaj. Ah, well am one of them! Hahaha XD |
Kittencharmer chapter 24 . 1/9/2011 Okay, NOW I understand why Sephiroth is mutilated. The parts from which each remnant was created makes total sense, at least symbolically. Actually, it seems to be a good thing that Yazoo wasn't with the other, or he'd have been captured, too...unless, of course, the bad guys got him separately. You do put these poor guys a lot though, ya meanie! ;D |
natzilla chapter 24 . 1/9/2011 Kadouche ! ROTFLMAO ! haha, love it :D Ok, Boom, Im lost. Who are those 2 guys ? a turk and someone who looks like the president, but what are they doing in the lifestream. Its only for dead people after all. Very smart idea, the concept of Kadaj being the hand, Yazoo the eye and Loz the heart. :) but you were so cruel with Yaz. :( poor poor thing, I know he is partly responsible but still. Poor babe |
DamonWesker chapter 24 . 1/8/2011 That was an awesome explanation about how Yaz, Loz and Kadaj are literally parts of Sephiroth. Yazoo being his eye, sees what he has seen, and of course Loz is part of his heart, that makes sense. And then Kadaj, being his left hand...that's why he was so good with a sword. Yep, very good description of how the remnants are a part of Sephiroth. I like it. But how is Seph ever going to be whole again? Now that the remnants are true individuals they can never rejoin him, right? Poor Seph...what's to become of him, I wonder? Whoa, not President Shinra, not that fat ol' bastard! Loz and Yazoo just never get a break, do they? Oh well, you can't have a good story without good antagonists. At least this time Yazoo can come rescue Loz...I hope. Hey, what did they mean by saying Seph was, "Probably another copy. Like that boy."? What boy? Oh, I can't wait until the next chapter! |