Reviews for A mistake that made two miracles
CSG chapter 15 . 1/29
This was cute, but needs a lot of work. I over looked it because I thought the plot was good. The one thing that bothered me the most (besides the spelling) was the name change of a character in a story. You introduced Irene into the story, but then called her Kate later. Ok, Thanks for sharing! :)
pixie.casey chapter 14 . 7/3/2014
I think this was an original idea which sounded good, but wasn't pulled off properly.
Edward hit his pregnant mate, not cool.
Good read though
Mrs Jackson chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
I like it, but you should go back through and give more details as well as double check your spelling :)
Violet K. Odin chapter 2 . 1/11/2014
Interesting. I enjoy how you did not make the trio of vampires the typical 'bad guys'. I always enjoy originality.
KahtLynn chapter 3 . 12/31/2013
Hailey Or Mason
vampiregirl31 chapter 15 . 11/25/2013
i love it ... it amazing
Guest chapter 14 . 6/26/2013
omg total cliff hanger awesome
aashik chapter 14 . 6/12/2013
Hi have u posted the sequel
Guest chapter 7 . 4/1/2013
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Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Poor Bella, no wonder she always feels like a victim!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/12/2013
not really a shocker
the title and summery gives it away
steph A15 chapter 14 . 12/31/2012
You're story was amazing it was really different and it totally worked.
nidhakanan83 chapter 15 . 12/31/2012
plz update ur other stories plzzzzzzzzzz
Guest chapter 15 . 12/28/2012
where is the poll at?
anonymous chapter 11 . 12/28/2012
Am I the only one that noticed you cant spell?
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