|Reviews for Geronimo loses his family life|
| Katastrophy chapter 5 . 11/19/2011
This story is starting to take shape. Well done. Will look forward to the next chapter.
| Terminal10 chapter 5 . 11/16/2011
I would appreciate it if you made your chapters longer.
| STILTON chapter 4 . 6/27/2011
| bruse chapter 2 . 6/27/2011
| someone chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
This is too choppy and doesn't flow very well.
| DragonlordR chapter 4 . 10/27/2010
Not bad... Although I think you could replace the swear with something cheese-related(Hey, that's normal in the books!). Characters are good enough, and overall, I'm inetrested in this.
| Crystalwhisper chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
What about bringing back Hercule? I want him going into more trouble. Heheheh...
| Callie Osgood chapter 3 . 3/17/2010
I think the story is quite nice, though it would be hard to picture Geronimo swearing. Though in other aspects, you captured his personality perfectly.
I hope you update soon.