|Reviews for stumbled, started to slip and fall|
| NickyR chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
LOVE LOVE LOVED IT! I especially loved it when sarah said
“If we do this,” she echoes, her eyes shining. “We can do anything. Trust me.”
Im waiting for that moment in season 3, but you know they have to drag it out, personally i would love to see them as a couple and I dont think it would ruin the show, only make it stronger!
PLEASE WRITE A SECOND CHAPTER!
| jagged1 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Very nice - almost a 'soft' M, just the right level of sweetness and hotness. I liked the interaction in the early part of the fic too, and how Sarah assured him a few times, 'we'll make it work' or 'we'll figure it out' - (now we need to see some of that same attitude on the show...;)
Great work - thanks.
| AngelOfDeath07 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Well I would have never of guessed that was your first attempt at a Chuck fic you write like a professional! You stayed true to the characters and I actually belived that would be what Sarah would be thinking in that kind of situation. Also it wasnt overly graphic or used silly words to decribe... certain body parts :P
| chucksara4ever chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
very good story, characters and sexy well written needed this with events so far in s3
| bohoxlove chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
smut & a story line.
| rnnrgg chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
I'm really looking forward to more stories from you; thanks for writing and posting this fantastic first effort in the Chuck fanfic world!
| NerdsAheard chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Dang that was awesome! Thanks for sharing and I hope you write more soon.
| jinxed97 chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Great first Chuck fic...looking forward to more work from you.
| Fire From Above chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
I liked the sweetness.
| sgafan360 chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
I liked it, certainly not what I was expecting when you called it porn (far tamer than what I was expecting) but it was quite good. Anything longer coming in the future?
| passionovermind chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
| seaboji chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
welcome to the fandom. this is great and i can't wait to read more from you!
| Abilf chapter 1 . 2/1/2010