Reviews for Born of Fire
SocialSuicideGirl chapter 2 . 5/7
Oh man I have a baaaad feeling this story will never be completed, but I still want you to know that I really enjoyed it and thought the story was very interesting and had a lot of potential to go really exciting places!

I started watching this cheesy firefighter show a couple years ago called Chicago Fire and couldn't help thinking back to it every time you mentioned something about life at the firehouse, lol. It absolutely wasn't because your story is that cheesy, it's just my only other source of firefighting knowledge, lol!

The development of a bomb being planted in Hinata's car was unexpected. Great opportunity to show off Naruto's hunky professional firefighter persona and introduce some more characters, but honestly I was satisfied with Hinata trying to find her place in the firehouse and how she felt about being kind of a bystander in the face of all of these emergencies working with first responders. Having said that, I'm very intrigued to see the development of the bomb plot, or I was until I realised this story is probably long since dead and gone, rest its soul.

Great intro in any case, these early developments were really effective in drawing me into the world and wanting to know more. You're a great writer :)
Bluewarrior3 chapter 2 . 1/16
Awwww is that it? It was getting so good. I hope you can update this story but most stories i read end up not updating for a very long time but even still i gotta ask. Even tho its only 2 chapters it was a very good story
NarHina chapter 2 . 5/11/2019
Really I wonder who planted the bomb and love how Naruto was protective of Hinata. Really wish you finish the fic I can't wait to see some more NaruHina fluff. With how both Hinata and Naruto haven't had any luck I think the two are just what the other needed.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
Monster King chapter 2 . 11/25/2018
Please continue it soon it great job
Usagi Hina chapter 2 . 8/28/2017
This story bad so much potential, it's a shme that it's been 7 years since your last update.
Usagi Hina chapter 1 . 8/28/2017
I liked it
muzicaldove chapter 2 . 6/30/2017
please update!
muzicaldove chapter 2 . 6/30/2017
please update!
Hina Hime Chan chapter 2 . 4/26/2016
Please, please update.
Xcherokee chapter 2 . 4/15/2016
Awe please continue
Beatrizmar chapter 1 . 2/7/2016
I'm still hoping you'll continue this story... I loved it
Dragon-hime chapter 2 . 10/3/2015
Wonderful work in all the pages of this story!
Please more pages soon!
starWhores chapter 2 . 8/23/2015
I'm aware that you've probably abandoned this story, seeing as how it's been like, 5 years, but it's really should update
Guest chapter 2 . 7/20/2015
This could be a great story, it doesn't have to be long. I just wish I could read how you would write it, maybe inspiration will come back!
Kintora chapter 2 . 5/15/2015
Can I just melt here? You know, a small puddle of fuzzy goo. This story is too cute. I really wish you would continue it!
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