| Reviews for The Story of Us |
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   sue1zide chapter 10 . 12/13/2024 Not “moist” or “dripping”! |
| sue1zide chapter 9 . 12/13/2024 I feel bad for them. Neither of them have a place of their own. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2024 You write the most gastlighting, abusive, worst Bellas my god |
| debb lavoie chapter 11 . 11/16/2024 Bella drunk was not cute. Making Edward jealous was not a good idea. |
| debb lavoie chapter 10 . 11/16/2024 Wow, worn out |
| debb lavoie chapter 8 . 11/16/2024 I'm happy she didn't push Edward away. |
| debb lavoie chapter 7 . 11/16/2024 Ugh, gross Jake! |
| debb lavoie chapter 6 . 11/16/2024 Of course Jake is stalking. |
| debb lavoie chapter 4 . 11/16/2024 So cute how awkward they both are. |
| debb lavoie chapter 3 . 11/16/2024 Her life sounds perfect to me. |
| debb lavoie chapter 1 . 11/15/2024 Some first meeting ! |
| Nellybean0710 chapter 52 . 8/3/2023 Wow this story was amazing. I absolutely loved it. I loved that it had a little drama but it didn't take over the whole story. A |
| sue1zide chapter 2 . 9/29/2022 I’m surprised that he would smoke in his car. I know that this is all in my head but I can’t picture a doctor having thoughts like Edward’s having. lol. Too high on a pedestal. |
| Guest chapter 52 . 6/1/2021 The second half is just about the kids. There is no storyline whatsoever |
| Robsfan chapter 1 . 4/16/2021 It amazes me how Edward is single a s hot as he is |