Reviews for The Cavalry Rides Again |
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![]() ![]() ![]() While I love your reason for picking David as Tony's middle name, most likely it was Senior's middle name, too. A lot of times when someone is a junior, they get the full name, including middle name, of senior. And it seems your family was like mine. If I heard my full name, I knew I was in BIG trouble. But I imagine Tony is in big trouble with both Ducky and Gibbs, and maybe even Abby. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it's not like Tony hasn't fooled his entire team before and for a long time. The guy is just that good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Tony. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! The dialogue between Gibbs and Tony was perfect and I could picture the story like a tv episode. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the insights that you shared in this story. You provide explanations for things in the tv show that never made sense to me (ie. Tony always snooping into his coworkers desks). Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished all of your NCIS stories and wanted you to know how much I enjoyed them. I like the relationship that you developed between Tony and Gibbs. Wish you had continued writing about them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This already sounds like exactly the story I am going to need today I LOVE IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay in chapter 14 you explained and are forgiven |
![]() ![]() ![]() You cant assume that everyone knows what tftwnq stands for, some kind of flu I'm guessing but if your going to use anacroynisms then you need to explain too. |
![]() ![]() As agents who are likely trained in first aid, DiNozzo and Gibbs wouldn't put a tourniquet on Dina-tourniquets can cut damage a limb to the point that it must be amputated. With a helipcopter showing up immediately, its more likely that they would have just applied pressure bandages...they wouldnt risk a tourniquet unless no help was available for a significant period of time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story very much. Thank you for sharing. It is wonderful. :D |
![]() ![]() Wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Over all this was a very good story with spot on characterization and a solid plot. My only quibble is Valley Fever is caused by a fungus, not a virus. |
![]() ![]() THANKS FOR FINISHING THIS WONDERFUL STORY. LOVE GIBBS AS TONY'S "DAD".. GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR BOOK AND FREELANCING WRITING. THANKS FOR WRITING AND POSTING. THANKS, STERNO |