|Reviews for Pandora's Box of Sins|
| Lily chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Hi! So you may never read this, but I wanted to review because I find the David-family angst quite intriguing. Plus, your little comment about reviewers being more likely to succeed tempted me, seeing as I could use some luck.
Anyways, I really like the way you portrayed Talia. She feels almost ethereal, like a ghost, a perfect way to portray her character given the context. Ziva's anger is very relate-able as well. Very good work!
| Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Another sad story..I like how you described Ziva as caught between Tali and Ari, really more like Ari but wishing she could be more like Tali.
"She should not have to face a sin that didn't belong to her." Love that sentence. Good work :)
| AnotherStupidNickname chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Love it. One of your best.
| zombienath chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
wow, that was great! i'd never really thought of ziva having the middle personality between ari and tali; but now that i see it, it makes sense :D
| areanna123 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
i greatly enjoyed this story.
| Quinndolynn chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
I say I won't review every one and then... But there were so man things I loved about this one: scorpions, half-chaos and half-peace, the subtle foreshadowing, the unspoken possibility that her father gave her a faulty gun (totally something Eli would do), and your acknowledgment of the constant tension between writing the stories one wants to write, and writing the stories that get reviews. Lovely.
| Anon chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Beatifully written, a little sad. I really, really liked it.
| Mooncombo chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
I just found this and I have to say it is very well written. I love your descriptions and your details, particularly your reference to the compass finding true north. Very good.
| time.forgets chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Well I wouldn't dare go against those Nepalese reporters so I shall review and say Well Done. More then that actually- it was amazing. You caught exactly what I felt Ziva would be like as a child and you made something so insignificant seem so important. great writing ) Jules
| Tides of Gray chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
I love this story, even without Tiva. Fantastic work. :D
| xxxAprilxxx chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Great story, I love the relationship between the siblings.
| Alidiabin chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Loved it. Loved the sarcastic coment at the end.
| Tash905 chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
You did a wonderful job in writing this story. I love reading stories and writing stories about Ziva's past