YokaiAngel chapter 4 . 9/30/2015
Go hashi~~~
Guest chapter 2 . 12/19/2013
Hikari-chan-san chapter 4 . 10/5/2013
This fic is so awesome! I love how there's lemons in like every chapter
Kyusee Heiky chapter 4 . 12/22/2010
Okay, first I have to say that I'm French Canadian, so my English, really, really suck. But I'll do my best because I think that's important to let reviews.

So, first, I found interessting the RP's style into a fiction. It gives all the side of the story, with the opinions and thinks of each part. I love it. Second, I just love the plot, -and seriously Madara is too cute like this- the way that Hikaku try to take Madara make me sick but, well, it can be tolerate a minimum. (Shit my english is totaly discusting, forgive me please.)

Finally, I have a question. Can we have a part 4?
Blood-And-Water chapter 4 . 2/14/2010
I adore this story! Write more! please!

I love your characterisation too, which helps the story no end. I was surprised something this good came from a RP where the characters tend to be what you want them to be not what they are.
KunoichiWolf chapter 3 . 2/3/2010
Omigosh was Izuzu dreaming about Pocky? :D

And oh Hika-cha is evil D I can't wait to see what he does! Maybe a jutsu to make poor Mada unable to move? o.\/ Whatever it is, I'm looking forward to it! (*is a total sadist*)