Reviews for The First Time
Firebird Scratches chapter 1 . 2/20
YOU ARE KILLING IT. Killing it, and killing ME. XD Seriously, is there anything you write that isn't amazing?! Guh.
calliopechild chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Oh, this is *lovely*. Very dark, very poignant. You did a great job on this one. :)
tmntlover2013 chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Great job on the story I liked it alot.
Willowfly chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Have I told you this story makes my heart ache? But in a good way, of course. You've taken all the angst and pain and blood and turned it into something poetic.

The candles...I'm not sure where you came up with that, but it's brilliant. And I still can't get over the eloquence by which you write. You give me something to aspire to in a realm where talented writers of your caliber are hard to come by.

I love this fandom, and I love these fics. But sometimes I get disenchanted, and it saddens me. And still, you keep writing from your never-ending well of genius, reminding me that there's still something in this fandom that I can enjoy.

Your stories are like a light in the darkness for me in many ways. I feel as though I don't tell you this as much as you deserve. But you do. You deserve every syllable.

Love ya babe,

Willow
Gohanzgirl chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Wow. Just Wow! I'm completely amazed!
Longing for Leo chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Oh awesome, you're continuing it! Seriously, you're a great writer, and I love this story and the way you portray the family. So, thanks for writing some more, and I'll look forward to the next installment! :D