Reviews for Living in War
lightskinrose chapter 17 . 3/13
It was a good story until this point. You made God and Satan afraid of Maria. What kind of bullshit is that? With how powerful you made Jasper and Bella, why can't they take to fight to Maria? Why do they have to wait for her. Why do thousands year old vampires have to regards Carlisle and Esme who are basically children as parents? Jasper could have been a friend of the Cullens coven instead of having him live with them. In fact, why did fuck are they bunny munchers? That alone makes them weak and not the powerful vampires you try to make them.
PrincessNight chapter 17 . 2/8/2016
Oh,its amazing,pllllzzz update sooon
dawn.schlimpf chapter 17 . 6/16/2014
Please update soon!
jaspersmate81 chapter 17 . 3/15/2014
I absolutely loved your story. Keep up the excellent work. I am confused though why God would side with Maria and make a pact with her, considering that he created Bella and Jasper for the very reason of ending vile creatures like her
Why would he make a pact with Satan as well. Aren't they like on opposite sides? I understand that they can't interfere with the Earth plain and directly interfere with its inhabitants, but isn't. Make a pact between them and the she devil a bit much. I mean can't they tell how mentally unstable Maria is? Sorry, for my mini rant. Just confused, but I did thoroughly enjoy reading your story and I can't wait to read what happens next. Please don't give up on it, its a real gem with a potential for real greatness
Thanks for the hour of enjoyment.
Guest chapter 17 . 8/9/2013
please please please update asap thank you
I love twilight bella Whitlock chapter 17 . 7/27/2013
I like it keep me updated
MoonPrincess623 chapter 17 . 4/25/2013
Oh dear, I am quite in love with this fic! In fact, I am not reading books for class because of it! Ah, a retreat after the depressing news from now teacher about an essay I wrote.

Love it! I am so glad you updated. I can't wait till it happens again, whenever it happens again.

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YunaNeko chapter 17 . 4/24/2013
Love It! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!
RaeRae064 chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
So good! I've read this story about 5 times..I love it!:)
TheWhitlockGirl chapter 16 . 10/25/2012
just found your story and have seriously loved it, but then it stops here and it doesn't look like it has been updated in a long time, such a shame.
MCR Killjoys chapter 16 . 9/7/2012
please update on this story as soon as you can

Becky xxx
Lizmny3 chapter 16 . 8/23/2011
Lizix chapter 16 . 6/13/2011
Nice story! Please continue!
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