Reviews for Loving Family
LaughingLadybug chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Fluffier than a truckload of marshmellows. I love it
Wonderwomanbatmanfan chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
I like this one, Yes you should write more about Tony and Emily and the rest of the gang. I hope I hear for you soon :D
Flamable chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
hello i just finished watching iron man 2 and i found this sweet story..i couldn't stop imagining if tony ever had a daughter..i'd think he'd be such a good overprotective and loving dad..i'd love to hear more about Emily and Tony..maybe you can write when she's around 12 and she sneaks in the basement and secretly wants to become a hero but of course Tony won't let her haha or something like that:D this story just makes me smile:D
Downey for President chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
Aw thats so cute, more please *-*
newworldwriter1 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
yay! i liked it! cintinue if you can! :D
Anonymous chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
This was so cute! Please write more about Emily! I would love to read more family stories :)
always a happy ending chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
The story idea itself is solid, but your right about the ending & it's off that Tony is left asleep when they have guests coming. Your best bet would of been to skip the party idea, but keep everything else, so the story is still centered around the baby, family, etc. Instead of the party, make it a reunion of friends with Steve coming over and seeing the baby for the 1st time, something like that. I think your pitfall & the reason the story tapered off was all these characters coming for the party. you committed the story to having to introduce all of them, having to know all their backgrounds & writing dialogue & interaction parts that is too much effort for a ficlet. i like the idea of writing about t&p as a family with a baby, very few writers have done this angle.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
This gets a 10 out of 10 on my fluff-o-meter. I love it!
The Crimson Nutcase chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
i would love to read more with emily

great story
pleasecontin chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
write something about tony singing to the baby and let every body hear it
Winteroses chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Emily was really cute and funny in this story:) So yeah, I'd like to see more of her:)