Reviews for The Spark Of A Fire
Wolfman9623 chapter 41 . 11/3/2021
Beautifully written, well done.
HellRaiderS chapter 41 . 8/15/2021
Perfect story loved it
looneytunes378248 chapter 5 . 10/6/2018
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looneytunes378248 chapter 4 . 10/6/2018
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looneytunes378248 chapter 3 . 10/6/2018
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looneytunes378248 chapter 2 . 10/6/2018
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looneytunes378248 chapter 1 . 10/6/2018
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wtf chapter 3 . 8/11/2018
what about annabeth?
StickyFingaz chapter 41 . 3/7/2018
Please tell me you're doing a second book, because this one was just sooo good...
MarethyuQ chapter 41 . 3/6/2018
Love the story. any plans for a sequel?
Perseus Apollyon chapter 41 . 1/31/2018
...update?
josh01264 chapter 3 . 9/1/2016
The gods have killed for petty reasons before and killing a time bomb at ten-years old is not so bad if u look at it through the gods point of view
josh01264 chapter 2 . 9/1/2016
OOC Percy, I can't remember Percy liking bitches like thathe hated pplike that. Andee also acts superior plus she is instantly friends with a child of Athena who are known for their never ending pride
Moon's Son. Reborn chapter 2 . 8/9/2016
I know this is an old story, and I respect you for finishing it; but this is coming off as a bad start. You make it seem like Apollo has NEVER had daughter. In mythology he has had godly and mortal children. And I HIGHLY doubt that no one other than Apollo would have a child in Canada, no matter if they are Greek or Roman. And Andee is a Mary-Sue. Having someone crushing on someone that they don't know is a clear sign of a Mary-Sue. And the way you described Andee down to every detail is another way to tell. She already seems OP as crap, and then most people would make her even more OP. And why did they choose her exactly? Because she was a tri-blooded child of the gods? Or was it just a matter of luck? Or was it because her trainer just said "Fuck everybody else, we are going for her,"? If she had gotten the training, every other powerful person should have gotten it, but there is no clear backstory to the reason. This is not a flame,
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Rip Ryu chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
Wait. The chapter is good but I have some questions.

One, wouldn't she be the granddaughter of Zeus anyway? Since Apollo is the son of Zeus?

Two, what do you mean the only daughter of Apollo? Do you mean his only Canadian Half-blood?

Ok, first this is not a flame. I just was asking questions. And, I must say, this story is quite well written. If you can please PM me the answers please.
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