Reviews for First Kiss
snow eopard chapter 26 . 4/17/2013
awwwww wheres the rest
Guest chapter 9 . 7/6/2012
Wait, how old is Bella and jake?
cloudshadow22 chapter 26 . 2/26/2011
Now how can you leave this gentle story hanging like this! I hope RL has not dragged you down with it. Hope you return to this story some day because it is beautifully written. I would love to see how things work out for Jake & Bella.
cloudshadow22 chapter 7 . 2/26/2011
Wanted to say thank you for writing this sweet story. I must have found it many months ago and put it onto my favorites' list, but I never got around to reading it until this week. Love reading your ideas about their early years. The shared valentines are so cute. Can't wait to see where you are heading with our favorite twosome. Glad to see that Alice is still Alice, even though it probably would seem strange for her to be going shopping with a 13 year old if she looks 17/18.
Noini chapter 26 . 1/24/2011
This is a lovely story, I have really enjoyed reading it, Its sad that you have not finished it..

would love to see more,especially what did Sue say to Bella. red much ;D
Emma chapter 23 . 1/3/2011
Andi is a fucktard! I hate her! An Edward I've hated him before I finshed the first book of the twlight saga! Orther than my out burst I love u writing and I'm telling others about ur story toooooo
Heart Beats For None chapter 25 . 10/15/2010
I loved this chapter . good on Billy for guving Jacob the talk and not being blind to things that could happen when two young people get caught up in the heat of passion. You wrote that so well, and poor old jacob was just planning a innocent day for himself and Bella.

I knew that Eddy boy was planning something and now he has Andi in on his game and yeah i think Bella should be very careful around him as well jacob around Andi. i know everything cant be all fluffy and happy but you know what i say WHY THE HELL NOT lol. If they never break up and stay together through out the story it would make my day!

Ok this is the last chapter so im sad :( I really hope you have some time to be able to get back to writing cos your story is just BRILLIANT AND BEAUTIFUL. Ive read alot of stories some that have been really bad and i only last a few chapters and then i dont bother. i love to read something that jumps up at me and makes me pay attention and your story has done that for me since chapter one as you could yell with the reviews! Thank you so much for the time and love you have put into it so far i look forward to reading more xxxxx
Heart Beats For None chapter 20 . 10/14/2010
I was surprised that Rachel and Alice got along but i could semse that rachel was a bit cautios to begin with and even territorial over Bella, letting Alice know that she had more of a bond with her that Alice did and i hvae to say i liked it heheh I dont know what game Eddy boy is playing but it creeps me out i have to say well he always did creep me out in the book so i guess nothings changed lol.

The flash foward was beauitfully written i totally loved it and i cant wiat to see when they do take that step in their relationship its just a beautiful. they seem so connected. i got the feeling that Jake had visioned what Bella did with the flash back i hope so!

Yep i love this story and your writing keps me wanting more! xxxx
Heart Beats For None chapter 18 . 10/14/2010
Ok Billys cool. He gave jake some really great advise and im glad to hear that he feels guilty for who things have gone with Andi and im happy to hear that he gets the connection between Bella and him, its the same one that sarah and himself shared as well.

Well didnt Jake get more than he bargin for when he went to take a shower lol he just so sweet i know i keep saying that but the way you have wrote his character make him such a beautiful young man!
Heart Beats For None chapter 17 . 10/14/2010
Pffff that was hard to get through lol

Yep that girl is trouble with a capital T. I was hoping that Jake wasnt going to head over to her place but Jake being the absolute sweetheart he is had felt bad about the way he treated her, and wanted to talk to her and make his feeling for Bella known to her bad move Jake bad move, with him kissing her back 9 even though he was thinking of his wedding day with Bella) has given her motive to keep trying. Damn hussy she needs to BACK OFF!

And she rang Bella to tell her all the details man if that doesnt give jacob reason to tell her bugger off then hes not as smart as i think he is. I had felt really sad for Bella and i hope he listens to her when she said dont let her get between them. :(

i know things like this have to happen for them to evolve into adults its just sad to read but i still love the story and life is hard and sad at times!
Heart Beats For None chapter 16 . 10/14/2010
Great chapter, i glad that Bellas mind has been put at ease with the Andi situation and that Billy has agreed with her hanging around wasnt giving the right impression.

The flash forward are interesting i like them and im so happy that we will get a feel of how jacob feels about things. Sorry the review is a short one but i just have to get to the next chapter lol
Heart Beats For None chapter 15 . 10/14/2010
Wow our boy Jake is a smart man!1 he was onto Andi and kicking her out was brilliant i loved it hehehe, but i wonder did she try and kiss jake or did she tell him that she wanted to be with him? MMMM i wonder
Heart Beats For None chapter 14 . 10/14/2010
Jkae just broke my herat when he said that he doesnt expect for things to fall back in place where they left off so sad but he is such a sweetheart he was giving her the option if she wanted out and explore different things and people.

I loved what Bella said to him back about Andi and that maybe he was the one wanting out, and letting him know that he is all she thinks about first thing in the morning and last thing at night, and i have a feeling that kiss just about said it all with what they feel for each other.

I was giggling when Charlie had the siren whoop whooping to get their attention and i though he was going to bust a nut, but he was so cool about and poor Jake OMG freaking out cos Charlie had a gun hehehe. And when they decided to come clean cos they had too, Jake said that they have decide ti get married I was ROTF LMAO he is just to sweet i love your Jacob.

Billy wishing that Sarah was there to see it, i think she is not in body but in soul.

I hope Billy is truthful about him being happy about Jacob and Bella being together cos i have a feeling he is trying to push Andi in his direction and it worries me a bit and Yeah i can see her trying to cause trouble, shes not even trying to be friends with Bella she got her eye on one thing and i justhope Jacob picks up on it and outs a stop to it real soon!
Heart Beats For None chapter 13 . 10/14/2010
EEEEE i feel a change coming hopefully nothing big ... ok i will hold on to my seat and pray that Edweirdo doesnt come between my Bells N Jake.

Arrr i just hate that they crashed jacob and Bella first date and typical Mr creepy stalker had to make everyone feel uncomfortable, i was glad when Bella picked up that vibe from him. I was cute to see jacob jealous just as Bella was when Andi showed up in the garage. So funny they when to the cinema and the movie that was playing was a vampire one lol i could of slapped Alice telling them eyes on the screen is there no end to there interference grrrr.

Still loving it at you can tell xxx
Heart Beats For None chapter 12 . 10/14/2010
Aww poor Bells freaking out over Andi and i have to say i am too, but i have a feeling that its one sided jake doesnt like her like Andi does her and jealous bella so cute.

I loved the flash back Bella has of Sarah, its like she is there guilding her showing her that shes there and pushing her on the right path. Sarah brushing her hair and braiding it then after Bella hurt herself Jake offered to do the same. I would even go as far to say that Jake is very much like his mother in every way. bella oogling Jake well you cant blame the girl for that I do that on a daily basis lol
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