|Reviews for Beneath the Bluff|
| FrustratedLawStudent chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Great story! :) Will you continue or rather expand?
| SeekingJamestown chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
I really liked this.
| samiam77 chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
This was great and I really think you should continue it into a full story!
| daydreamergr chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Very good story! Love this Edward but I would like to read more of this story.
| youngandmature chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
I liked that very much. The writing was powerful and at times heartbreaking.
Though I do have tonnes of questions as I'm confused on some topics:
-Did E ever cheat on B? By kissing Lauren that was cheating, right? Or did that happen after she dumped him? If not, why did he kiss Lauren?
-B's reason for believing Renee was confusing.
'"I wanted it to be true. I wanted to believe that I couldn't be that happy. I wanted to believe you couldn't love me that much-you're Edward Cullen. It was easier to just leave than to hurt my pride and realize how I sabotaged our relationship."' If she never left her pride wouldn't be hurt as she didn't sabotage it!
-I'll hazard a guess and say that B and E probably never really enjoyed sex before or after each other. It was empty, probably. After their short relationship they probably had to image each other to get off. They never did love anyone besides each other right? Before and after they first got together.
-The Jacob thing kinda confused me. Why was Bella with him? Did she even like him? Did she have sex with him? How come she dumped him? And then said she wish she hadn't as she'd been dropped for the heist? What's he got to do with it? And why would Ro have to distract him if B could do it as his gf!
| my2galspal chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
I liked Casinoward. Thanks for sharing him with us.
| MissRe chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Casinoward is hot. I really enjoyed your take on the crazy world of casino robbers. I didn't think I'd like the Ocean movies when I first saw them, but I did. This takes me right back to that love. The witty banter, the sarcasm, the hot sex... awesome.
| pippapear chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
I LOVE HEISTWard! He rocks! :)
he is charming & debonair & cheeky and yeah. Picturing him in a tux helps a lot too! ;D
Sorry I am yet again so BLOODY LATE with this review! :)
Way too late.
For shame on me. .
I really enjoyed this - it crackled and sparked! Which I love in a fic...
I thought Bella was remarkably restrained and detached. . . I would have caved.. but then that heistward visual is still killing me! :D
Oh & delish yummy intense make up reconnecting shagging there my dear!
Whew! What a visual - but also what a well written scene. Gah kill me dead with pleasure!
Thanks so much for this!
Lotsa love babes!
Hope you doing good!
I LOVED your interview with Stephie! Great fun to read! Thank you for answering my questions! :D
x x x x
| kmfroggi chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
oh, i loved it. casinoward is an arrogant bastard, huh? and bella is quite strong, i like when she's like that. wonder what she meant when she said this was the man she was waiting to see?
| jackiehydelover chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
I love Casinoward! I'd love to see another one shot of the entire crew, Bella included, robbing the casino! Or maybe even a short story if you're up for it. Adding it to my alerts and favorites :D
| violet09 chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
LOVED Casinoward! I liked how he was so vulnerable, yet didn't even know it :)...is it weird that I'm picturing Casinoward as a blend between Brad Pitt and RPattz? All those casino robbery movies are getting to me... :D Thanks for this! Really enjoyed it!
| gitgit chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
casinoward is so sexy
that was brilliant!
| LadyChery chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
I am a big fan of Ocean's Eleven. wish there was more to read
| dixiedoll chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
i was waiting to hear about the heist..
maybe you should do a part 2 or something..
just a thought.
| MarchHare5 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Wonderful smut, really enjoyed it. Plus, I loved the set up to that scene, the hints at the history between them, the portraits of their personalities.
But the entire time during the final scene, I was waiting for the other shoe to drop, the realization that Bella was playing him, that she'd timed her arrival at his hotel room precisely in order to distract him from his assignment. That she was in fact sabotaging the heist, whether through involvement with a rival group of thieves, or with the hotel's owners, or simply out of revenge. Because her return to him seemed a little too easy.
Still, I liked the outcome. :) Any chances you might expand this into a multi-chapter story?