Ted Tonks was not a muggle, he was a muggle-born wizard.

Funny, really funny, that a 29-year-old would be called "an old dog"! But, that is a really old age for a dog, LOL!

I love the story but these last couple chapters are excruciatingly boring. Way too much detail.

In 1988 cell phones were still big and bulky, and in no way would they fit into a pocket. Most were still using the ones installed n cars or bag phones. The ones you could carry looked like a large walkie-talkie. The first truly "portable" one, a Motorola, came out in 1989. It had a long antenna that could be pushed down into the phone for easier carrying. This site should help. 2009/05/the-evolution-of-cell-phone-design-between-1983-2009/. Or this one. They make it easy to check when writing FF. . . In case you are interested for future stories, here is a good place to check out the growth of game systems. wiki/List_of_home_video_game_consoles#Second_generation_(1976%E2%80%931992)

Col. Jack O'Neill?! LOL!

Soooo... using movie characters for her "team"? Riza Hawkeye Pierce (named after the MASH character?) Roy Mustang & Winry Rockbell, Full Metal Alchemist? Rachel Luttrell, Avengers? George Takei and Walter Koenig, Star Trek. I got nothing on your "Radar" except the MASH character.

Why keep it under wraps? Amelia could show her memories to the Wizengamot, or Fudge. She could say she got a tip and bring Peter in for questioning. There's many things she could do to move things along

He should copy the letter and send it to Dumbledore, but from a different location

so, not even their researchers knew it was a horcrux?

I am glad there is a sequel. I was watching for the remaining chapters dwindle and feared it would be incomplete. You have an interesting take on what could be.

Awww. poor Harry. This separation will be good to get him used to doing without his family once he's foisted off to Hogwarts where no one sees their parents for months on end.

*psst: 8 and 9 year old boys are not all that mesmerized by Broadway plays... ... ...*

Why do stories like this always have Sirius going way too far overboard with his punishments for Harry? Is excessive punishment somehow supposed to be sexy?

Absolutely loved the plot. The spelling and grammar mistakes bothered me, but not enough to stop reading. I can’t wait to see what happens next.

Yay! Finally done! I love how well-rounded your Potter-Black family is! I absolutely love that Sirius' duchess is a squib! This story truly makes you feel that whether you are magical, mundane, or squib, it shouldn't really matter. Everyone is great in their own way and contribute a lot to the world if they so choose.

I would love to see his mundane school friends continue in the story and become helpful and amazing themselves.

Only critical part I can comment on is that the story felt a bit rushed as you raced through Harry's childhood. Just let Harry stop and smell the roses a bit and focus more on showing Harry's relationships with others. You have built an absolutely amazing support system for Harry, and I want to feel more...the feels of that. That will be Harry's truest strength in the end.