with all the informaton that sirius give bones, she can find them without much problems. really, he say to don't have enough with harry beeng an horroxu, the search for his head, and voldy still somewhere alive, .no, he has to fall for a person that has her own pals that wants her head too. but well, whats life witout Challenges. lol

see you

Thanks! I appreciate you getting another chapter out.

To bad you didn't have Harry take Kenpo. It is a nasty martial art I studied in my youth. I have never seen another style where they teach white belts to kill. :} They teach you to kill with one punch!

JimS

that was so awsome. cant wait for more. update soon!

Ok so i really like your story. But i think there may or may not be a plot hole. Why is sirius a fugitive? Is betraying the people you are secret keeper for against the law? because technically he didn't kidnap harry. and if he didn't go after petigrew, he can't be accused of killing anyone so...why?

Putting the explaintion bout half way down the page was not good! I went back as skimmed the previous chapter after the 1st 2 paragraphs looking to see IF I had missed a chapter! :o Once I realized what was going on, it was otay.

THANKS!

JimS

Aw:( poor sirius! Next chapter!

this is a really great story so far. cant wait for more. update soon!

Hia,

I'm loving this story, but am just wondering is it supposed to make such a jump from chapter to chapter 12? How has Sirus gone from being out at a meal with Amelia Bones to being injured? Or will that be filled in with flashbacks?

I don't mind if you do it that way, just am curious as it took me a few minutes to get into this chapter because of the leap.

But apart from that I love the concept and I love the story as a whole.

Keep up the good work, update again soon

KAHPfan

Thanks! I was getting bored and needed a new chapter! :}

Ever hear of a movie called "Troll"? It is about a boy named Harry Potter Jr. & his little sister. It has magic, BUT nothing to do with wizards or Hogwarts! :}

The reason I asked is it was on Chiller tonight. :}

JimS

Very interesting and well thought out version of the Sirius abductor. I like it and am looking forward to the next chappie.

great story keep up the good work. why can i see this becoming a sirius/amelia pairing

Thanks. That was just what I needed to close out the night. :}

JimS

Hi. I do not review a lot. That is because I am stroke survivor & have hard time putting more than 2 words together! :}

I think you have a good story started and I hope you will be able to finish it!

THANKS!

JimS

this was a good fanfiction, though i found it hard to understand at times. try to explain a little more in the future.

Rueflower small and delicate

new twist on the story for me ... I've never read a fic where Sirius still had to run even though he didn't "kill" peter & those muggles in the street . It looks like it's going to be an interesting story . Thanks for sharing it with us !