Reviews for Sirius' Savior |
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![]() ![]() If Sirius had taken Harry, he wouldn't have chased Pettigrew, and therefore would never be framed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it a good apology by the father? I dunno. If the ass hadn't been so stubborn about not even looking at the evidence that convinced others sooner, "his apology" wouldn't be necessary because he'd have already helped get Sirius and Harry there before this. It's good he eventually saw reason, but I'd think he still owed some groveling for his previous behavior. So this president is magically as strong as Dumbledore? I guess I can swallow that, although it seems a bit unlikely. Especially since it's not like in Dumbles' situation where he got his positions after defeating Grindelwald, this guy was apparently a politician that got elected. What are the chances such a powerhouse would spend their time doing politics (instead of other magical pursuits) and running for president? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lt. Col. Jack O'Neill. Lmao. Nice Stargate reference. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mustang proves to be a bit of a coward here with the President. Hold out the file after his last little tantrum and yell back, "Read the file!" Stare him in the eyes angrily. Hold the file out to him. He's not stupid. He'll figure out you must have a reason for pulling such a stunt when he's already threatened your career. He'll read what you found and see the same things you did. Or he could've explained the situation in a more round about manner before saying the name of the person so this whole misunderstanding could've been avoided... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am just starting Chapter 47 and am thoroughly amused at the number of recognizable names you're using. It's fun to read them all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Charms with Jack Harkness:) Perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Second reading. Excellent story. Great world building and characters. |
![]() ![]() If the old sleaze loses all his other titles for just cause, why oh why would he be allowed to be Headmaster of a school ? Very good story. Well done. |
![]() ![]() Excellent story. I find it so easy to read right through your minor errors that the flow of the story is not disrupted. My only complaint is the story will end too soon:) I hope you write a sequel! Outstanding and 100 points to Ravenclaw! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am glad Minerva is now an ally. Harry will need her when he goes to Hogwarts if Snape and Dumbledore are still there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You didn't make it easy and in doing so you made it more realistic. Glad it is gone. |
![]() ![]() This was a great story, so looking forward to what an educated, travelled, intelligent Harry will do to Hogwarts! Really enjoyed a grownup Sirius and all the extra muggle and magical characters who made an appearance. Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Doing a reread. Still a wonderful, interesting, and intriguing story. I am always happy to read a matured and alive Sirius-as-guardian story. I do wish you had the time to continue writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A tour de force. Extremely entertaining. I salute you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant! |