Reviews for Sirius' Savior |
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![]() ![]() You realize cell phones didn't work like that back in 1988. They were huge, weighed a couple of pounds, didn't have sim cards, didn't have roaming. The batteries barely lasted 30 minutes. The sound quality wasn't good. They were entirely different from cell phones today, or cell phones in 2011, or even cell phones in 1998. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thoroughly enjoyed this story! Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, love the dropping in of characters and cast from other shows, Stargate fan and Atlantis.. oh and MASH too… |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know I've read this before, but thanks again for a great story! I love some of your pop references to the A-Team and others. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a great story! I absolutely loved this. Thank you for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love SFO! My friend and I were walking around and found ourselves at the foot of Lombard St. Our Hotel was at the top. It was a LONG walk up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A/N: Awesome, thank goodness for that. Don't wanna read another best mates connection with Ron Weasley and his funk. |
![]() ![]() Well, damn, now we've got part of the A-Team too! |
![]() ![]() Captain Jack, Kaylee, and Inarra! Waiting for Jayne and Simon too |
![]() ![]() Oh my Goddess, how perfect can you get! Captain Macolm Reynolds of the starship Serenity! |
![]() ![]() A fellow Whovian?! I totally LOVE Rose Tyler! |
![]() ![]() I love the famous names you have inserted into your story, I have met Walter Koenig, a very nice quiet man. |
![]() ![]() This is a good story. It has engaged my attention and I’m planning to finish it so I’ll probably write something then. Unfortunately, the punctuation is exceptionally poor. I have had to re-read some of your sentences multiple times just to figure out what they mean. Ordinarily I would just stop reading something like that, but I’m really invested in the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting fic - but the author's choice to use both the names of characters from other IPs and of actual people REALLY tends to pull the reader (or ar least me) from the story. It comes across as almost cutesy and annoying. Would it really been that hard to develop actual names for those OCs and run with it? The use of 'Emma Watson' as a witch Sirius used to date was almost the breaking point for me - but I've come this far... |
![]() ![]() And then Yiska died because Sirius never actually gave him explicit permission to share the file with his granddaughter. |