And then Yiska died because Sirius never actually gave him explicit permission to share the file with his granddaughter.

A cell phone in the 80s?

So amazing!

the only complaint that I have in this story that hasn't been addressed in your author's notes is...

whilst I realise that Sirius is honouring his friendship with James and Lily by naming his children James and Lila how traumatic would it be for Harry? at the time of the triplets birth he was still coming to terms with the memories of his infant hood. and yes... it's taken me this long to actually realise this

Jack O'Neill?! And I finally realized some of your characters are from Full Metal...this is cool!

What an awesome story! I loved it from beginning to end. Ignore the people who write any nasty comments. Or tell them to go write their own, then come back and give you a link. ;)

I’m looking forward to continuing the next part.
Thanks for sharing your story

Rather enjoyed how you've grown Sirius in this chapter. Loved the introspection regarding his more youthful self. Very well done!

IDK if I reviewed this chapter the last time I read this, but the end is pretty bad. It is as if you just "chopped off" the end of the story. "I'm tired of writing, let's just stop here"

Reading this a second (maybe 3rd) time.

I'm just over half way through this series and already like it better than the original Harry Potter Bookes. This should should be made into a Movie. As a 76 year old F_rt (some do not like cuss words in reviews?) entertained (keep my ADD pacified) to the nines! Love It. Hope there is more to come. Sh_t you should get paid for this book.

Its Hindi not Hindustani
I AM A INDIAN. ACTUALL ONE NOT ONE OF THOSE FAKES AND COPYCATS IN USA

From Guam to Alaska to Washington DC?
Better to just say it gets cold when you are way up high, especially in a military transport.

Just curious, is Sirius still searching for the "one-armed man"?
:-)

Smh, this was turning out to be good but then you had to add Beth smh. I’m a skip ahead but if she’s still there then I’ll be done reading this story.

Hi! On the off chance that you still glance at your reviews, just wanted to let you know that I finished rereading this story - so enjoyable! It's really held up & was as much fun to read today as it was when I originally read it. Thanks for sharing your imagination with us. :)