Reviews for Red Ribbons
babykelly chapter 5 . 7/10/2010
Hey its me! Yay i blew up a arena anyway realy good story just a few spelling/gramerh mistakes. cant wait till update
CryingRainbows chapter 5 . 7/8/2010
OMG this si really good! i started an OC fic and only got one review so far so i wish better luck to you!
TMI chapter 5 . 6/12/2010
Mwa ha ha I shall review so you will update! My master plan will conquer all! Anyway, update or else I will send my fictional minions after you! Come out, Maximum Ride, Percy Jackson, and Pikachu!

Percy: What am I here for?

Maximum: *flexes wings* can I punch someone?

Pikachu: PIKA!

Me: That is Pikachunese for UPDATE RIGHT NOW!

Maggy Minns chapter 5 . 2/27/2010
Good story. I kept trying to find this story.I'd read part of it before. Back when you had only like three chapters. I'm adding this story to my favorites, so I want more chapters!
Mending the Sky chapter 5 . 2/16/2010
Well, I can only review once here, but overall, not a bad chapter. Few typos and punctuation here and there, and remember to start a new paragraph whenever someone new starts talking.

PS Wasn't the blow-up-the-arena thing a bit much? lol

And the gods weren't too OOCif any.
Mending the Sky chapter 4 . 2/10/2010
Thanks for adding Quentin, and I knew she was Aphrodite's kid. :P
XxXMika-ChanXxX chapter 4 . 2/10/2010
tre tre good wrk on this were almost no grammar oh plz cotinue this wonderful u don't i'll let zeus all he is my olypian parent
babykelly chapter 4 . 2/10/2010
hey cool you updated cant wait till you update agian keep going
TMI chapter 3 . 2/7/2010
That was really good! I liked how you described everything, but you might want to look in on how you use punctuation in the dialogue.
Maggy Minns chapter 3 . 2/7/2010
Maggy Minns chapter 2 . 2/7/2010
Maggy Minns chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Nice chapter
NameHere97 chapter 2 . 2/7/2010
I don't really read these kind of stories.

Do not put authors notes in the story itself, only in the end or the beginning. It is good grammar is spelling. I am guessing on Aphrodite, really. She seems like that.

And, I just read the other reviews, and everybody has written what I just wrote, so I am going to shut up now.

babykelly chapter 2 . 2/4/2010
Yay theres mt oc i like how you showed my charter so cant wait till you update
Staceeee94x chapter 2 . 2/4/2010
Another great chapter

Cant wait for the next chapter :)
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