Reviews for Whip it Good
Rosepetal987 chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
-Mmm, the things one can do with a whip.-

Hm, well, I am starting to understand this pairing, and MarMar's uke side, he is not submissive and constantly resisting, but he is also a sex fiend that finds pleasure with really /anyone/. He also does not like pain, but is use to it. *Taking notes* So much research...
caspercumbuddyxi chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
"...until the emotion was too much..." I'm going to assume that this is meant to be somewhat crackish XD

"Why don't you suck yourself?" YES! Go Marluxia!

...even under these circumstances, I can't really imagine Marluxia crying. He does get a hug and a non-fat cookie for having to be whipped.

...and a milk bath. Because it's good for the skin. Xemnas gets... um... a half-eaten goat. I 3 rape scenes in fiction, but Marluxia's my favorite character so seeing him as the forced submissor makes it kind of weird. I liked the story though.
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Oh, my...-/-

That was quite violent...But, cool!