Reviews for Pain
Palimpest chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
The length was surprisingly effective- like a snapshot of a day in the life.
Abcbatsyzyx chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Thanks. I could really imagine what was going on. You are a really good writer. Thanks for another great story.
TheKritty chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Oh JEZ. *drops*

"Hard concrete. Sharp pain. Choking."

You DO know that you gave me a fit of *squee*ing for a whole minute or so, right? Jeez.

I really really enjoyed this!You did a very very very (!) good job!

And btw, I could never shoot . .


Tribble Master chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
I'll stay with you! Oh! Oh! (jumps up and dows) Pick me! ;D Poor dean. You really made those short sentances pack a punch. Write on!
PADavis chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Oh, liked this one too.

DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
ouchie! concrete faceplant! bev x
1983Sarah chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Sounds like that spook got the better of Dean, good thing Sam's there to help him out!
Edina Clouds chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
nice job with the imagery Lamia

bhoney chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Nice. I especially liked the way you used short, staccato sentences in places.
nwspaprtaxis chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Poor Dean... But at least Sammy's on it and he's going to be okay... just badly bruised and probably has no voice (and his voice will be shot to sh*t for a few days)... and love his head killing him and he's grabbing Sam's jacket for focus.
Colby's girl chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Wow..awesome drabble. Great action. Ever consider expanding on it? Thanks for the read.
Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Oh, this one was awesome! I loved it!