Reviews for A Gypsy Marriage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love Clopin i find your story today and i find it interesting i hope you upload this anyway is a good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this is really good! It seems like Layla is starting to warm to Cam and Clopin now! Please say you're going to update! |
![]() ![]() Awesome! Please update! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will you update or are you leaving it like that? I'd like you to keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will you update or are you leaving it like that? I'd like you to keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() pleeeease update! this is really really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, man! Why'd you stop here? D: Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha PDA XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() You may gain more readers if you didn't scare them hun 1: Paragraphs are WAY too large. 2: INDENT and start NEW paragraphs when dialogue comes into play. |