Reviews for Never knew it could be like this
tanseynz chapter 20 . 6/30/2014
Well done Jasper! He's convinced her that forgiving herself only comes when he's inflicted pain on her, and it only took him less than a month. Btw, that's not a consensual Dom/sub relationship, but quite a different psychological tactic.
tanseynz chapter 18 . 6/30/2014
How the heck did Charlotte blind Jasper into thinking she was a responsible vampire? She's worse than Bella.
tanseynz chapter 14 . 6/30/2014
Ahh Stockholm Syndrome. As a military man Jasper knows exactly how to inflict it, and who better to use it on than a seventeen year old high school virgin he wants to rule? Poor Bella. She's never going to become a thinking adult.
tanseynz chapter 9 . 6/30/2014
Sorta funny that Jasper has put Bella in this situation because of his immature jealousy. Let's see 'the Major' sort this one out. Or will he just blame Bella for it as he did when Mike threw an arm around her?
tanseynz chapter 7 . 6/30/2014
A comment: as a writer it's a good idea to research the parameters of a situation in order to make it believable. Your scenario of Jasper hitting Bella because she didn't eat, and then picturing her eating a large filling meal immediately afterwards isn't realistic, unless you are presenting Bella as not human and therefore not bound by human behavioural norms. Otherwise, interesting story. You can clearly see there is something supernatural that ties them rather than regular attraction.
tanseynz chapter 6 . 6/30/2014
Astounding. He thinks she can eat after that? But he's a vampire, so likely hasn't a clue what pain does to hunger.
rayray chapter 35 . 5/16/2014
sorry but what the fuck are you crazy never never this is the most bullshit i have ever read in my life i know you put your heart into this story but this is the 21st century and i dont care how much of the mating pull bella felt she would have never put up with the whining bull i can understand the other female vamp dealing with the shit because of the time period they where raised in but not bella you took away what makes all women in this this century is born with and that is our will to be strong i can understand the being submissive but you took her will you took away the most important thing that made bella and jasper right for each other
xstoryloverx chapter 10 . 3/7/2014
This story was written before once upon a vampire
Sunshine011 chapter 48 . 1/27/2014
Aww this story was A-MAZ-ING! I absolutely loooooved it and you are a freaken AWESOME writer. Not that you need me telling you that, I'm sure you already know. Anywho GREAT job!
CurLy QueEn SwiRl chapter 8 . 12/11/2013
Guest chapter 6 . 10/15/2013
omg wtf
juliet709 chapter 14 . 9/29/2013
ok i have to say this. i have recently found this story and i dont mean this to be a flame for you or nothing but hell, who spanks someone, a human at that, so hard out of love? any man no matter what his possition may be would have my foot in his nuts in a matter of seconds if he tryed to pull that shit. i am all for kinky shit and a little pain with pleasure but hell.
emmacat1234 chapter 7 . 7/6/2013
Your Jasper is cruel. That is NOT sexy, that is ABUSE. What you are doing is glorifying domestic violence and you should be ashamed of yourself. A man hitting a woman to teach her a lesson is not loving, it's controlling. If one girl reads this and decides that this is sexy and that this is what she wants, you are setting her up for a lifetime of abuse because this is what she thinks love it. It also glorifies the roles of female submission. She had to BEG to get an education. And she was punished when she studied. I was in an abusive relationship similar to this, but thought it was fine because of a book I read. This work of fiction could also act as the same for another young woman. It might put the idea in her mind that this is alright. IT'S NOT ALRIGHT. Think hard about what you are putting out there in the world. And if you feel like it's alright to laud women being abused in the guise of 'love', then you should be ashamed.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/5/2013
I know this was written a long time ago, but I just found it. While I don't mind a consensual D/s relationship, this is NOT what you have here. He is punishing her as a disobedient child. And then after her 'spanking' she feels loved and protected? Yea, ok, that's real believable for a human girl who does not know the ways of vampiric mate relations. No offense, but his actions do not scream love to me, controlling?, you bet. He wants her to know her place and stay in it. He's awful and her quick blind acceptance doesn't bode well for a healthy relationship.
Mist17 chapter 14 . 4/6/2013
I wish you could make it so bella wasn't completely submissive, I mean after a spanking let her stay mad at him and give him the cold shoulder for a little bit, so that he sees that them being together there needs to be comprising and he needs to see that they are equals shes not just someone he can copletely 100% control and spank when he sees fit.
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