Reviews for Never knew it could be like this
tanseynz chapter 38 . 7/1/2014
Hmmm he knows what Tanya has done to Bella, condones the first two pranks yet goes caveman on the third? Not coping with loss of control isn't a good look Jasper. Sorta weenie, in fact!
tanseynz chapter 34 . 7/1/2014
Yeah, yeah, yeah, she's just a possession. We GET it!
tanseynz chapter 32 . 6/30/2014
Wtg Jasper - must have upped the reconnoissance skills of your team since James was around.
tanseynz chapter 31 . 6/30/2014
He's a master of war tactics yet is taking his mate off for a holiday alone with Aro still somewhere out there? Jasper, you're fired!
tanseynz chapter 29 . 6/30/2014
Jasper doesn't trust Bella. No wonder he punishes her for not trusting him. His ego is evidently wounded because she behaves the way he does.
tanseynz chapter 28 . 6/30/2014
Good lesson Bella. Next time you're kidnapped, emotionally abused and then confronted with your kidnapper when he's in a position to easily take your protector, the Major, down, just throw him to the wolves. After all, the Major's ego is far more valuable than his, or your, life!
tanseynz chapter 26 . 6/30/2014
'You're paying for my door.' C'mon, the Major should be literate and as an almost high school graduate, so should Bella.
tanseynz chapter 25 . 6/30/2014
Aro was an idiot. Why not take Bella and Charlotte to Volterra instead of a backwoods cabin in the same country as Jasper? Short-term planning, doesn't sound like him at all. Are his brothers on his butt?
tanseynz chapter 21 . 6/30/2014
Poor Bella! Fate REALLY doesn't like her.
tanseynz chapter 20 . 6/30/2014
Well done Jasper! He's convinced her that forgiving herself only comes when he's inflicted pain on her, and it only took him less than a month. Btw, that's not a consensual Dom/sub relationship, but quite a different psychological tactic.
tanseynz chapter 18 . 6/30/2014
How the heck did Charlotte blind Jasper into thinking she was a responsible vampire? She's worse than Bella.
tanseynz chapter 14 . 6/30/2014
Ahh Stockholm Syndrome. As a military man Jasper knows exactly how to inflict it, and who better to use it on than a seventeen year old high school virgin he wants to rule? Poor Bella. She's never going to become a thinking adult.
tanseynz chapter 9 . 6/30/2014
Sorta funny that Jasper has put Bella in this situation because of his immature jealousy. Let's see 'the Major' sort this one out. Or will he just blame Bella for it as he did when Mike threw an arm around her?
tanseynz chapter 7 . 6/30/2014
A comment: as a writer it's a good idea to research the parameters of a situation in order to make it believable. Your scenario of Jasper hitting Bella because she didn't eat, and then picturing her eating a large filling meal immediately afterwards isn't realistic, unless you are presenting Bella as not human and therefore not bound by human behavioural norms. Otherwise, interesting story. You can clearly see there is something supernatural that ties them rather than regular attraction.
tanseynz chapter 6 . 6/30/2014
Astounding. He thinks she can eat after that? But he's a vampire, so likely hasn't a clue what pain does to hunger.
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