|Reviews for A Child At Heart|
| woodlandfairykirk chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
I likes the fic, but it was kinda OOC. Don't get me wrong, I think it was well written by I kinda feel like it would be more fitting if you switched Deidara for Tobi and Sasori for Guy sensei( cause of the fist pump) :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
So freaking cute
| Precious Trinket chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
This was beautiful, adorable, & sweet. The childsih parts of Deidara were endearing & they reminded me of my 30 year-old cousin who has a mental dissability. He's physically older than me, but in my mind & heart, he will always be my "litte" cousin. And yes, it hurts when people are mean & cruel & try to discourage him because he's so childish... But I wouldn't have him any other way. So this fic was especially precious to me. Because it cherishes something that the world seems to lack. And that something, is childsih innocence.
| FeatherBerry chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I loved this story. Seriously. I'm a bit speechless at how to describe what I liked, but I know I liked the little details that are pure genius that you put into the story - such as the 'No Sasoris' sign and Deidara shouting out his love to the world except for Hinata. Those details made me chuckle :)
| xartxisxaxbangx chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
WHERE DO YOU GET THESE IDEAS?
Just so you know, they rock.
And Sasori trying to get Deidara to be a man?
| Heaven's Evil chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
it was good, i realy liked it
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
I didn't expect to like this story as much as I did. this is my favorite deihina AU fic, and i can really imagine deidara acting like this, and i love sasori, and how he trains him to "be a man" for hinata.
What really won me over though waz the scene on the couch with the teddy bear when deidara was wondering what itd be like to touch her, and i just found mysef completely in love with all of the characters.
| Oashisu chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
was sop adorable and !
| The Fun House Residents chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Beautiful story! Heartwarming. I felt fuzzy feelings inside while reading it!
| KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
aw! its both kawaii AND hilarious! i loves it alot!
| Ina-chanz chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
You think this story's bad? It's great! REALLY great! If you want to see BAD, look at "A Worthy Masterpiece" by me! I hate it so much! You may ask, "if you hate it so much, then why don't you just delete it?" well, to tell ya the truth, I just can't bring myself to! :( ANYWAY, back to the review...
I really like it, and some parts were just hilarious. When Deidara yelled that he loved Hinata and Sasori was all "YES DEIDARA! CONFESS YOUR LOVE!", I couldn't help but think of Gai-sensei and Lee! XD I can just imagine random people looking at them going: O_e". XD And I also just felt so sorry for Deidara when he realized how much stress he was for Hinata, and looking at his room and -sniff- holding the little bear! Feeling so bad! T-T Why DOES he act like that anyway? idk...So at that, I conclude my review-BUT WAIT! You're gonna update Rich Girl? YAY! :D -happy dance- Okay, see ya!
-Am I the first reviewer? That's great! YES! But if not, because it's possible someone else already reviewed but it didn't show up on the website yet, then...CRAP!-